Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown - Comments, page 3

Ayyye. Yes do a humor one!! I think I'd like to try it out cx This was a pretty fun chapter. They're gonna have to find out she's not prego... Nel is gonna have to come clean . Lmao Nel is still a virgin! How's this gonna happen xD Things sure will blow up. Shits gonna hit the fan. ;-; "I ran around like a headless chicken." I don't know why but I love so much. I kinda just imagine a headless chicken running around with its wings flapping all crazy. (I'm a demented child...) Waaaaait, did you just say we're having a sequal? What? We are? Since when? I'm confused xD This story is life. I had an okay day. Hbu? I love you too!!!(:

WAIT. WHAT?! IS NEL LYING?? AHHHH I CAN"T TELL SHE'S TO RANDOM ALL THE TIME TO TELL. WHY COULD'NT SHE DO SOMETHING ELSE?! IM PRETTY SURE IF SHE JUST RAN IN THREW HER ARMS UP AND SCREAMED THEY'D STOP. ehhhhhhhhhh-nyway, great fanfic it's probably my favourite! keep up the good work! :D

THERES GONNA BE A SEQUEL TO THIS??!!!or is it to another story????? OMG Nel faking that is not good at all. Maybe she can get Mike to sleep with her and actually get her pregnant before he finds out. Just a thought. She's in too deep. And she made Mike cry. I can just feel the drama getting ready to explode. And I'm so excited. So let's get this straight?? Is this gonna have a sequel or are u talking about another story???! Ugh I can't wait till chapter 50 now and I'm more excited to what's gonna come next!!!!!

Haha oh crap. No bueno.

@WriteIsLife
Oh of course! Anything for band merch!! XDDD

@Chaos'sWolf
It was! I will, darling! Would you be happy to pay a small fee for postage if I sent band merch though?

@Midnight_Darling19
It was, want it?! I just updated, only a few left! Ahh I'm sorry! Of course I will write another. I will miss this one too though. Thank you so much!

@Fangoddess
I loved that part! It's my favourite too! :) it will be very interesting!

@Fangoddess
I think I should congratulate you then! Well done! Thank you so so much! I just updated. Let me know what you think! :)

@SlowlyFadingAway
I'm doing super super good! Ahh I'm sorry! Mike is! Oli is! Vic probably is haha! People do tend to take things out on Oli right after getting locked into tight spaces. That would be a lovely ending, wouldn't it? I loved that part hahaha! Sorry about what? I am? This is still weird to me! Maybe I should look at other authors stats and maybe it'll make me realise how popular I am - I mean that in a totally unarrogant way I promise. It is insane and crazy and I am so so grateful to everyone!

@loveptv
Thank you so much! That means so much! We're out there, you just need to find us :)

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
He will be mad at so done! Hahaha that would be good. Hahaha I loved that part!

Thank you so much fore sharing all this with me. I'm so happy that you trust me to tell me all this. I'm so so proud of you and I promise you that you are beautiful. You're doing so well and can fully recover. When you change and you will because everyone does it'll be for you and will be wonderful. I am always here for you and I promise everything is going to be okay xo

I loved it! It's interesting to see how she'll get out of this one. My favorite line: Mike has chopped him up into tiny pieces and stuffed him into tubs of bleach. I'll have to tell this story to my little cousin - Pippa, get her good and scared for when she starts high school next year.

So I've spent all day reading this story, and I absolutely loved it! I can't wait to read more!!!

Yooooo, I'm okay. Thanks cx how are are you? DONT YOU DARE REMIND ME ABOUT THIS 4 CHAPTER THING. Mike is pissed, Oli is a prick, Vic is probably gonna hit Oli. Idk. Oli gets hit a lot in this story ;-; They'll have to get out.. one way or another. Clearly it's the theme. Oli has ruined a lot but not everything. I'd like to end this story with Mike regaining his memory, Oli dating Dom, Mike and Nel together, and Vic with some random chick idk. "Better start learning sign language, Skyes." Mike Mocked." Ooooooo better get some ice for that burn!!
I am so sorry about that. Haha you are a big story person. With 128 subscribers that is pretty amazing so.

Alright I will explain me: I am a conspiracy theorist, I am a rock music enthusiast, I am an otaku with little to no social life, I am not the happiest with my wait but I've gotten out of my E.D. I think I haven't skipped a meal on purpose in 3 months, I am a very depressed person, according to my friends throughout the years I'm motherly, I often care to much about the things I shouldn't (thus my depression reaching said level) and ignore things I should notice (and I don't even do it on purpose) I think that women being EQUAL to men would be nice, women who are EXTREME feminist frighten me even though I'm a girl it's still scary, I do self-harm (though I'm trying to stop), I do not know how to show my emotions maybe its because I'm a Sagittarius or maybe it's cause I willed myself from showing that I care hell I still do that I need to stop it's not good, I'm a selective mute (basically I rarely talk and to be honest I might become a full on mute...a part of me hopes I do the other hopes I don't), I can see spirits (and it can be freaky as fuck), I am also haunted by bad dreams idk why, I share to much about myself to random people because I trust to easily (another reason for my depression), I've come to live with "the worst thing about betrayal is that it never comes from your enemies" carved into the back of my eyelids yet I still care and trust and love, I am slightly afraid of the dark...hey the dark is freakin scary ok, I do quote and pun WAAAAAAAAY to much and yes I did just think of the sass queen Gee, I am afraid of my parents for little to no reason, I wish for impossible things because I'm an optimist (I feel like this is ironic), I love everyone I meet until they give me a reason not to, I keep secrets easily, I also have a sh!t memory, I become best friends easily because I care to much but that's just who I am, I'm sarcastic and quick witted, I'm either grouchy or overly excited when I'm tired, I'm as clutzy as Nel, I have dyslexia but whenever it acts up I find it funny not upsetting, I love writing music and books and taking pictures and coloring/drawing/tracing, I suck at school work and I am a little behind, I'm also pessimistic sometimes (it's hard to explain) I believe that one day the world will change for better or for worse , and also even though most haven't noticed it the world is already changing just slowly ever so slowly but hey that's just me

1. I literally whisper shouted NOOOOOOOOOOO 2. Oooooh he might be mad but at who 3. Yes...I hope so otherwise they'll have to eat through a straw from under the door and I don't even want to know how they'll use the bathroom 4. It really does doesn't it 5. Idk 6. I hope not 7. Everything works out for everyone...except Dom she gets stabbed in the foot with a Lego 8.I showed up for detention wearing my vampire fangs. Mike is bringing his too. I thought it would make detention a little more fun. B said I'm being immature and stupid. But I'm going to college soon. I won't have much longer to run around wearing vampire fangs.
I walked inside my class and waved to my teacher. "You're looking groovy, Miss!" I grinned. "I like your jumper, did you knit it yourself?"
"Sit down, Nelissa." she tried not to laugh. I don't know why detentions must be so serious.

I wish there were more people that thought like you

That. Was. Intense. Like I was clutching onto my shirt. And my breathing was heavy. Ughhh four more chapters?! This is making me so sad!!!!! I'm gonna miss this story and you better write another one haha! I really hope Nel and Mike aren't ruined and such. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

Ohhhh that chapter wss intense! Yes please keep me updated with the contest and please do bands merch as a prize!!!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
Hahaha very funny ;) I loved that bit! And yes, all moms are the same!

@Midnight_Darling19
I loved writing that part so thank you! She doesn't seem like a very nice person at all! I'm so happy it made you smile! I just updated!

@SlowlyFadingAway
Hey! That's brilliant! That's so cool! Thank you so much! I think I'd like to go to warped too, but living thousands of miles away doesn't really help my chances. I loved that bit! Ahh I'm sorry it couldn't be longer! But thank you, I am trying really hard for PG with this one. Of course you made me smile! Am I a big popular writer? I'm really curious about this! Is that how everyone sees me? I think because it's been a real gradual thing for me to get so many readers I don't notice it. I'm greatful but I suppose I forget what it was like having no readers. It's just bizarre that people see me as a celebrity! You don't need to get too excited! And I'm glad it did! It was the truth! :)

Hola chicaa! I'm actually pretty great, I talked to my crush today and he talked back. It was great. It's good that your good! I thought this chapter was pretty funny. Made me giggle a few times cx I'm not sure what will happen in detention ;-; Narina is amazing.. although I think I'd like to go to warped first.. "You see," Jaime started, "Narnia is getting a little bit chilly this time of year. Don't believe the brochures, you could freeze the Turkish delight right out of the Turkish!" He explained" That line was life xD Don't remind me about the 50 chapters.. it makes my soul hurt ;-; High Five for keeping it PG!! It was me!! I'm glad it made you smile. I fangirl, bc your like a big popular writer and I kinda see you as celebrity so when you reply to my comments or comment on my picture I get really excited xD I will fangirl. Forever and always so. And I love commenting!
That last bit of the Note made my heart happy .

The joke Mike made made me die of laughter. I can't believe B's step mom would cheat!!!! Hahha this chapter made me laugh especially what Jaime said about narnia omg I laughed too hard. Anyways this chapter was great update soon!!

@WriteIsLife
That awkward moment when you can some an entire conversation up with Moms

1. Currently having a sugar high 2. HAHAAA to the "mom" 3. Everything will come out of the closet get it? No? ok then 4. Yep *pop the p* 5. Meh maybe 6. "The disgusting, little-" B was grumbling under her breath. to "I thought it was funny." I told Mike gently. He smiled at me in thanks and took my hand. was my favorite 7. You see I told you would be the best dudette