Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown - Comments, page 2

@Fangoddess
I'm sad it ended! But it ended the way I wanted it to and they way I've wanted it to end ever since I wrote the first chapter. Hahaha I actually loved that part! But wow, thank you so so much! B seems to be a lot of people's favourites. I think she's a really interesting character and that I developed her a of which makes me smile. This means so much to me, thank you! There's plenty more to read from me, I promise! Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! The sequel is now posted and on this site too!

@SlowlyFadingAway
Do both haha! Thank you, this is how I wanted it to end. Thank you! Wow, that means so much to me. I love both of those lines! Nel was clueless throughout the entire story! That's all so sweet. That's such a huge compliment for me and my writing. B seems to be a lot of people's favourites! More about everyone else will be in the sequel!

@todiefor
Awh thank you so much!

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you so much! That's such a compliment to my writing and I do appreciate it! You're welcome! The sequel is now up and on all sites as well!

@Chaos'sWolf
Thank you so much! I posted the sequel! It's up on all the sites now, I edited the link! And yay! I'm so happy you enjoyed them and loved them! Yes, take photos! I'd love to see them! :)

I'm so sad this story ended, but happy it ended on a good note. My favorite line in this chapter was maybe
"At the front Nel. You're a B." B said. "Well, you're a B too!"
But there is no way I could pick a favorite line of this story. It was full of hilarious moments that made me severely laugh out loud. But my favorite character, and this is a tough one, would probably be B. It was an indescribably amazing story, if that makes sense. I'm kinda sad that I only came across this story towards the end of it, but still glad I came across it at all. It's so well written, and the ending was amazing! Can't wait for that sequel!

I don't know if I should laugh or cry. That ending was so sweet. The note was the sweetest thing ever. So much sweetness. My soulless self can't handle this xD
Did I like the ending? Nope. I didn't. I'm sorry. I loved the ending. The ending is life. In this chapter? I did have a favorite line I had two actually! "Sometimes I feel all sad and listen to those sad Blink 182 songs on repeat." Favorite Line bc I do the same thing xD "At the front Nel. You're a B." B said. "Well, you're a B too!" I huffed." She was so clueless. I laughed way harder then keep should've. Was this story good enough for me? Yes. Yes it was. It wasn't good enough. It was great. This story is the definition of perfection. All the funniness (yes I made a new word) and the drama. Like you are a hilarious writer but you know how to make things really intense. It's perfect. Favorite Line from the entire thing? Oh lawd. I can't choose just one.. it's like a list if favorite lines xD I think my favorite character besides Nel is B. I really like her bc she's like a mom to Nel. Idk , I just really like B. Also, Bs real name is Becky. And all my friends call me Becky. So it's pretty amazing xD I'm expecting Jaime and Cassie to still be a thing. B and Tony to be a legit thing. Nel and Mike to be together and happier then ever. And Vic to have a lady friend himself. I kinda wanna see them own an apartment together. Like Jaime and Tony have there own place. And Mike and Vic will have there own place. And B and Nel and Cassie with there own place. Oh and Nel with her candy store!!!
im extremely excited about the sequel. Omf. So when it's up ill be reading it asap Cx I love you toooo

Ahhhhhhhhhahahahahahah (that's the sounds of me weeping because of this story's beauty)

This was the cutest and sweetest ending I've ever read and just aghbhh. Amazing. Just amazing. You are the most amazingauthor ive ever read from. Thank you for deciding to write this story and sharing it with us. Thank you so much and please post the sequel please please please

Oh man I loved that ending!! Im glad now Mike and Nel are officially on good terms! I really can't wait until the sequel!!!! (Oh, and I got the package in the mail already and I LOVEEEEE IT SOOOO MUCH!!! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!I'm really into photography and I just got a new sheet for my photography mini studio, so I'd love to do pics with the rings on and I'll send them to you soon!!)

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
Thank you so much! That's so sweet! Okay, thank you doll. She did! Thank you so much! I hope I get it! I have changed my name now. I do love some tumblr time though!

@Say all that you hav to say
He should really, shouldn't he!

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you so much! Okay, I might. It would be cute haha. It would be nice for that to be the ending. Thank you! I aim to pease! It wasn't the best thing to say, but don't cry! Read my other stories? I don't know! Ahh I'm sorry! It is quite long, don't worry! I'm so excited to post it! This story has been so huge for me to write. I love it! A lot will happen at graduation ;) I'm updating soon!

@SlowlyFadingAway
Hahaha okay! Thank you so much! Thank you so much, that means so much to me. Vic has let go. Hahaha I'll try to keep you happy! Ahh I'm sorry! I'm sad too! But I'm so excited to post the last one! And thank you!

@ambnicole
I loved writing that part so much!

@Tony Perrydise
Hahaha thank you! Sorry for the confusion!

@Fangoddess
Thank you so much! That means so much to me! Jealous of what? Of me? Don't be! Okay, I may be posting it! Thank you again! :)

@humanscomeandgomusicisforever
He may not remember but good things will happen. Ahh don't do that! I send hugs your way!

@Chaos'sWolf
:)

1. I have yet to EVER be disappointed by your writing why on earth wouldn't I vote yes 2. But don't you dare take on more then you can handle 3. OOOOOOOOOOH she told them the truth CONGRATULATIONS NEL 4. She will probably be very happy for no reason which in itself is always a reason pointless happiness is the best happiness 5. Two words over think 6. WHAAAAAAAAAT 7. I DON'T KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT THAT 8. A MILLION YEARS WORTH OF GOOD LUCK TO YOU DUDETTE 9. I'm thinking about deleting mine I next to never use it

MIKE GET OVER IT YOU ASS!!

Id honestly read anything you'd write. So post the sequel!!! I actually wanted Nel to be pregnant because it would be so cute!! Mike a dad and such. I hope Mike has enough time and forgives Nel. I really do. They're just so cute together and I don't think i can handle not having them together. This was so intense and just aghh I loved it. She should have just said she had a miscarriage. I think I'm gonna cry!!! The next chapter is the last. Then it's over. Oh no!!!! Whatever will I do?!!?? The last chapter better be long so. I'm so nervous for the next chapter yet excited. I feel graduation will be pretty dramatic? Update real soon!!!

Hey person! POST THE DAMN SEQUEL... please c:
Yes it would something I wanna read!! I'd read anything by you xD Just be you when you write it. Don't feel pressured and stuff.
This was pretty fantabulous. Vic has finally let go. Praise all things holy. Nel will get with Mike ._.)/ Mike better remember. I swear to all holy fucks if her doesn't... DONT TELL ME ABOUT IT BEING THE LAST CHAPTER Dx Buuuh, I'm very excited. Like Sitting-on-the-edge-of-your-seat-with-a-face-full-of-popcorn-excited. I'm doing okay. That's good!! That's a big deal!! GOOD LUCK. I will make sure to run my magic lamp (i think it's a lamp. Idk) and ask the genie to give you luck!

LMFAO @ them finding out she's not really preg. :)

Ohhh!!!!! That's so brilliant of you!!! Very clever. Okay wow it all makes sense thank you so much.

This story is so well written and fantastic! It kinda makes me jealous, but only kinda.
And I would love to read any sequel if you have one planned! You're an amazing author!

Please tell me Mike will remember everything!!! I'm worried sick about that!!!!! He has to remember or I'll fling myself off a cliff. It's that bad. I JUST WANT MIKE TO REMEMBER!!!!!!! *sobs violently*

@WriteIsLife
Yay! I can't wait to participate!!!

@Tony Perrydise
Hahaha she is! They're not sleeping together. This story is strictly PG. But Nel was just stuck for something to yell and Mike doesn't know if they've slept together or not because of the amnesia thing!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
It's okay, I do too! That's really good! Awh I love you all to! And of course not! I love you all! :)

@SlowlyFadingAway
Okay, I will! Please do! Thank you! Hahahaha I know. She is, Nel is definitely still a Virgin! I love that line! I just explained it in my note! I hope I made your day better! My day has been lovely!

@OhMyGodThisIsParadise
She is lying! She could have but Nel doesn't think things through much! Thank you so much! That means so much to me! I will keep writing forever and a day!

@Midnight_Darling19
I just posted about it! Hahaha it isn't good. That would be a good idea. It is getting very dramatic. Thank you, I'm excited too!

@todiefor
No bueno ;)

@Chaos'sWolf
Okay! I'll start planning things then! :)

I thought Nel was a virgin. So Mike and Nel are sleeping together?

Do you ever read the comments on this story (or any that I comment on because...I'm weird) and think "Are you guys on drugs or something" I'm just sayin

1. I still have no confidence and apparently I have trust issues...I don't think I should listen to my friend 2. GASP 3. Ummm weeeelll yeah Karma is going to pay a visit 4. God Ihope so 5. YES I CAN FEEL IT IN MY BONES 6. I'm pregnant 7. I am actually having a pretty peaceful day and remember how much we all love you, you awesome dudette