Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown - Comments, page 4

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you so much! I just updated!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
He was, wasn't he! I loved writing that part! He is jelly! It's not easy to understand, but hopefully it's like real life! You should! It was amazing! :)

Thank you! Hahaha I love that bit! I have had these conversations too. It must be a mom thing!

@SlowlyFadingAway
Hey! That's wonderful! I'm pretty good today! Thank you! Hahaha it is very funny. Go watch it, it's lurking about online somewhere. Hahaha well you'd think they should get out of there. I might just continue the story from the wardrobe though aha. Of course it'll stay PG! This story is going to end being 50 chapters. I'm planning on keeping it smut free. I love that bit! Oh, that was you?! Hahaha that made me smile so bad! Why are you fangirling over me?! You don't need to. And aha thank you! Hahaha well I do love your comments! ;)

Hey hey hey. I'm okay. How are you? This was actually quite fun. "Painfully British and Hilarious." Sounds like my type of show xD
Thankq for clearing that up. Haha, I'm slow at processing most things so. Don't they kinda have to get outta the wardrobe at one point.. I mean, they can't really live in there. Especially Nel, she needs food. B and Tony... hopefully this will all stay Pg I mean with tony getting excited and all c; "No! I'm with Tony you deluded idiot." She rolled her eyes. Poor Justin." Or "Mom," I frowned. "I have a boyfriend. B has an almost boyfriend and neither of us are lesbians." "You could pretend" she urged." It made me laugh so much omf xD I already follow you! You commented about my fucknugget usage and I fangirled xD You instagram is uhmahzang. <--- Lmao I made a new word ;-;
Excuuuuuuuuuse me, but uh.. I do have to comment everyday so.

1. Absolutely fuckin perfect 2. Review answer one 3. I hope so-not-so oh I don't effin know 4. Kissy kissy super prissy 5.You know I would be happy for you to marry Becky." she said.
"Mom," I frowned. "I have a boyfriend. B has an almost boyfriend and neither of us are lesbians."
"You could pretend." she urged.
"But how would you get grandchildren?"
"You're right!" Mom gasped. "Stick with Mike." I'm not even kidding when I say my mom and I had a conversation like this...recently...I'm seven-freaking-teen I barely started dating *sigh*

1. I'm high on my allergy medicine and sugar and for some reason tea so please forgive the weirdness 2. Pretty effin awesome Oli at least this one was kinda a d!ck just sayin 3. Oli came over and there was some rough rough talk. Then Dom started yelling mean things and B came. She hit Dom over the head with a skateboard. Dom fell so I thought she died but then Oli punched Mike. I think Tony pushed him. Oh and Jaime was laughing but then he fell too. B might have done something else too, but I can't remember. My goldfish has a better memory than me. That's a lie, I don't actually have a goldfish. Mom says I'd forget to feed it. But her goldfish blew up and exploded in the tank. There were fish guts everywhere-" yep that was the best 4. Awww he's jelly but hey he let her go or is letting her go it's confusing and yet realistic 5. FINALLY YAAAAAAAAY AND AWWWWWW 6. well I guess I'll just have to wait and see 7. Luckyyy I wanna go 8. Have fun 9. I'll be right there

This made me laugh and smile and just have feels haha. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

@SlowlyFadingAway
Hey! He didn't! Sorry for any confusion. They are amazing! I want you to be happy, it makes me happy! Okay, thank you! And don't be silly! You don't have to comment everyday - but please do!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
Oh I understand haha!

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you! He is. But thank you so much! I loved that part! Please go read! :)

OMG this one was hilarious. And uh oh Vic is upset. This one was great. The goldfish part was my favorite. NOW I HAVE TO GO READ YOUR OTHER STORY

The yes was for when you asked whether or not she'd wake up @WriteIsLife

Oh.. Alsoooo, I'm sorry for not commenting yesterday ;-; I was with people and they wouldn't let read Dx so

Hey laady. Okay... So did Mike remember or not? Bc I'm beyond confused xD But besides that it was great. I'm too lazy to type my favorite line.. Like really. I was outside, I feel into the grass. Now I'm still laying in the grass bc I'm too lazy to get up xD so. Vic is idk... I really don't. Mike and Nel being a thing is amazing. This makes me happy. I don't know what I wanna see.. I'm pretty content rn tbh. Bruh, that sounds amazeballs. I'll go read your story!!!

@yeah nah
You're welcome! You deserve to smile every minute of every day!

@arrogancedowntoascience
Thank you so much!

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you! It was, wasn't it! Hahaha with Vic everything would have completely blown up. Thank you darling. I hope you have a great time too. My work was fun, not much to do. I have to deal with a desperate guy which is annoying me though. I just updated!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
Therapy does depend on the person. Therapists like Grumble though are so much fun. What was the yes for? I'm confused.

She did! Didn't she? I loved both of hose bits! I'm so happy with this chapter really! Message me and I'll help you with your story! :)

1. *cracks fingers* FIRST YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY I'VE NEVER BEEEN SOOOOO HAPPY TO BE WRONG IN MY ENTIRE LIFE second HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIRD SHE EFFING DESERVED IT 2. *sigh* yes she will *mutters under breath* dang it 3. Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no not really 4. yep *pop the p* 5. "You big, fat bully!" B yelled. Then she came up behind Dom and hit her over the head with a skateboard. I gasped and my eyes widened as as if in slow motion Dom fell down onto the floor, her eyes rolled back and she lay unconscious.
"You've killed her!" I gasped.
"She deserved it." B shrugged. Well okay then.
"It's your fault!" Oli yelled at Mike.
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I've lost track of what is happening. I've never been more confused in my life. I'm standing next to the same tree while there's an unconscious Dom laid out on the ground, a sore Oli sat next to her, a bleeding Mike not far away, a Jaime lying on the ground, a Cassie trying to help him out, a rather proud Tony with his arm around pissed off B while she examined her knuckles.
are my favorite lines 6. I'm stuck on what to do in my story I have to find a way for her to disappear but not die but have everyone think she died which she won't and I know how she lives but how do I make her disappear

1. Sadly not quite 2. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAAHA yeah right but it might be close 3. But if Grumble is anything to go by therapy isn't as scary as everyone makes it out to be. 4. I find that as far as therapy goes it all depends on the person 5. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE *Takes breath* EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS Please

Oh my god that was so dramatic and I love it's much!!! Nel better dump Oli or I'm gonna punch the wall. I'm kinda glad Vic didn't join in on the group because the drama would explode!!! I really hope Nel and Mike stay together after all this and I'm really excited to see what happens next. Have a good day at work I'm going there too! It's sucks and is boring and sometimes it's fun but mostly not. Can't wait for the next update!!

So cute! (: great chapter!

This story never fails to make me smile, thank you.

@Midnight_Darling19
Awh that's so sweet! Thank you! That means so much to me. They kissed! The next chapter should be interesting ;) it is sad. I'm updating in a second! I'm excited that you're excited! :)

@SlowlyFadingAway
Hey! Thank you! Wow, that means so much to me. Hahaha well they may or not but there will be some on stitches along the way ;) thank you! You would? I'm willing to do it! I just need someone to tell me what kind of things they want tips on. I don't write classic poetry, but I do write lyrics which are just a less classical form of poetry. Hahaha listening to country makes him a bad person? You can call me whatever you like haha

Of course!!! I would aactually read anything you write. That's how much of an amazing writer you are. And OMG they kissed I just aghhh!!!!! I hope they are a thing now!!! And I also really hope Mike remembers again because it's sad seeing him notrremember. It makes me angry like him. Update soon I can't wait for what happens next. Drama? Emotional scene? I can't tell but I'm still super excited!!!!

Hey!! This was pretty great. Can I just say this entire story was great? Bc it was. Mike and Nel better be a thing by chapter 49 or so help me I will summon the shadows of the night. Nothing ever goes smoothly. There's always a bump or two. But I feel like it'll be okay. All the chapters are pretty fun... Yea... about that favorite line. Basically the whole chapter was pretty groovy. I WOULD LOVE TO READ A THING WHERE YOU POST TIPS bc I have been getting into poetry a lot lately. And idk. I kinda get lost so I'd love to get some tips. Ewh.. I don't talk to my brother ;-; he does weird things. And he likes country music.. I don't associate with his kind. I will find out. One way or another. So I can call you Bitchacho and you wouldn't mind? (Tbh I love the name bitchacho. It's amazing.)

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
She is very unpredictable! That bit was very funny! I loved that part! I just don't want to ruin it! I will be starting another story immediately afterwards though! And it should be equally as funny with the main character having a lot of similarities to Nelissa! :)

@Midnight_Darling19
Thank you! Ahh I'm sorry! But soon it'll be time for this to end, I'm not going to ruin it. I will miss it too! But I'll be posting another story fit after that should be super funny too. Thank you so much! That means so much to me! :)

@SlowlyFadingAway
Thank you! She will definitely. Just say your favourite part was the whole chapter! And I'm sorry! But another funny story will be up straight after. Only 9 chapters, correct. Hahaha you and your computer genius brother can try and figure out where I am and where I go every Friday haha. You can call me whatever you like, but my actual name is Kelic. But Kelci, Zee, Nel... I don't mind ;)