Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown - Comments

Aweee thank you babe iove you! Your so accomadating :)

@sleepingwiththedisco
I've actually posted the first chapter of the story you wanted to see. Go on my page and you'll find it. And thank you, once I'm not so busy you'll probably see more of me.

Okay thank you for that! I just needed that to calm down :) and i hope to see more storie sor continuations

@sleepingwiththedisco
I might just add a chapter here and there to it. I have loads pre written I just definitely don't have time to write. With working in retail over Christmas, working on the KKP and going to college too I have no time. But thank you lovely! You're so sweet! With Break The Barricade I'm not saying it's impossible, but so unlikely it'll be finished. Like I said I'm so busy and Simone is at university doing a psychology degree. I actually only get to speak to her properly around once a week because she's so packed! And ahh I see xoxo

And i meant for the other series i just commented on this :) since im lazy

Oh its ok babe! I just wanna know what happens but when you have time to do it hopefully i get to see it. Im in love with all your stories and i think your incredibly talented! I cant wait to see new stories and will you finish Break the Barricade??

@sleepingwiththedisco
We breathe don't leave was never related to this story. But it was only half done when I thought I was going to leave the site so it along with all my other unfinished stories was deleted. I'd put it back up but right now I really don't have the time - life is crazy. Sorry babe!

Where is the sequel We breathe, Dont leave?? I cant find it :( @WriteIsLife

@Just Shoot Me
Oh okay! I did update this everyday though so it got written pretty quickly. Say a solid two months-two and a half months to finish.

@WriteIsLife
Thank you. I've been seeing how long it has taken others to write their stories.

@Just Shoot Me
Thank you! Oh wow, started maybe a few months ago
i think.

Wow this is really funny. When did you start writing it?

Yes it is cx

Wow I'm so slow with replying!

@Forgetful-Insomniacs
I'm not a celebrity! I loved that bit! Thank you!

@oli_please
So your birthday is soon! :)

@Death-Before-Death
It was! About time too!

Now that was a proper kiss, finally Mike at a good time to ^.^

Ayee the deadline is on my birthday XD

1. I don't know why it's this site but whatevers 2. You are a celebrity 3. I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S OVER WAAAAAAAAAH-oh wait there's a sequel but I thought... 4. God damn it now I'm crying at your note 5. This was-is the most beautiful sweet fluffy NOT overly dramatic happy with a dash of sad and a bunch of lovey-dovey awesomeness ever 6. yes I did 7. don't I always "If we can line up into alphabetical order!" Ms Davies called.
Damn it. No! Oh no! What's my name? What's my name?! "At the front Nel. You're a B." B said.
"Well, you're a B too!" I huffed.
"No, your name, you silly goose. Your name is Brown. That means you stand at the front." she explained.
"Oh," that makes more sense. "Thanks!" I grinned....That is me...yeah I know 8. no it was to good for me that's how good it is 8. FUCK NUGGET IS MY FAVORITE LINE EVER 9. B/Nel 10.MARRIAGE BABIES AND NO DOM WHO GOT HELD BACK A YEAR OOOOHHH YEEEAAAHHH 11. I'LL BE THERE 12. I don't know how to delete my tumblr...I know I know I'm a fail to this generation 13. WE LOVE YOU TO DUDETTE *Throws a BADASS party over the internet with live (and fucking awesome) bands* 14. And to this story I say https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=axndmLcwOJU&index=5&list=PLbhXmTSBbAygtOGSkVwxo_3GwsfmqS27M
or
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RuTxhPRdKDA&list=PLbhXmTSBbAygtOGSkVwxo_3GwsfmqS27M&index=6
So long and goodnight

@humanscomeandgomusicisforever
Mike regaining his memory is something I really did consider. But I decided against it because I didn't think it'd be right really. I wanted Mike to love Nel again despite him not remembering. I wanted him to fall in love with her all over again. So I don't think I'd like to write it really. Mike will not be remembering in the sequel, unfortunately. But like I said I wanted him to love Nel despite the memory loss. But if you or someone else wants to write a short little thing with that ending id love to read it. Please message me and remember to criedit my plot p/characters etc.

Like the last few chapters change a bit and he regains full memory.

Hey!!! Can you pleeeeeaase consider posting an alternative ending to this story? One where Mike remembers everything. And they still kiss at the end bc I loved that. I just really want to know what would happen if he remembered. Please do this!!!!!! One more question: will Mike remember in the sequel? Sorry I'm obsessed with him remembering. I want to be assured his amnesia isn't permanent. :) You're amazing btw!!!