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Oh, and I would strongly suggest that you re-read through your chapters before posting them as you've kind of contradicted yourself in chapter six by saying that he grabbed his binder before running out of art, yet in the next chapter, you said that he didn't so had to go back and get it. I know that it's probably not an important thing, but what makes people read a fic is the attention to details and of course the correct grammar being used.

SoWrongItsLottie
6/15/13

I really like this, and I may only just be three chapters in, but I'm a little confused; in the first chapter you said that a fire killed Mike and Vic's parents, but in the second / third, it was some guy that killed them...so, which is it?

SoWrongItsLottie
6/15/13

@xMareBear14x
thank you! ^_^

diamond_bullet
6/13/13

@diamond_bullet
I feel like what Kellin is, is some kind of reference that I don't get... I really like this though, keep it up :D

xMareBear14x
6/13/13

@xMareBear14x
why? thanks for the feedback by the way c:

diamond_bullet
6/13/13

I'm so confused >.< Holy cow.

xMareBear14x
6/9/13

@sold-my-soul-to-the-music
thank you! will do c:

diamond_bullet
6/7/13

PLEASE KEEP WRITING OMFG I NEED THIS OKAY
AND I LIKED THE LONG CHAPTERS, FEEL FREE TO KEEP WRITING THE LONG CHAPTERS c;

sold-my-soul-to-the-music
6/7/13

@raven
thank you :D i'm glad i had the honor of writing your newest obsession xD

diamond_bullet
6/6/13

I love when I find stories that not even half-way through the first chapter I'm like "Oh my freakin god....I love this person for writing my newest obsession!" I can't wait to read more!