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Hmm if you want to rewrite it I'd say upload it as a new story. Cuz I really like it as is, but ultimately it's up to you(= I support which ever you choose to do!
Both work, I mean, if you can find the time to rewrite it, that would be cool, I would like to read it :3 But I don't think it was that bad, you know, so if it would be easier for you to continue, it would be fine too. I'm interested to see where this goes ;)
Maybe rewrite it, I don't know, it very much depends on what you feel like doing.
And, thanks for the cookie XD
Maybe rewrite it, I don't know, it very much depends on what you feel like doing.
And, thanks for the cookie XD
haha I just love how you said, "time lapse because I’m too lazy to write the rest of the day." my thought is AMEN MOTHERFUCKER.
Story time! I'm babysitting and I was reading "Feels so early" and I started laughing really hard at text Vic got from Jaime (YOU MET A GUY I NEED DETAILS O.O) Because its so Jaime! anyway the two year old kid I was babysitting looked at me like I was a serial killer and my sister came from upstairs to see if I was okay.
I really like the new update but you should probably know that it posted twice in the same chapter...
This is absolutely brilliant, and you've got such amazing unique ideas and story line! Please keep updating! c':
Aww, thank you so much for the mention in the author's note, I really appreciate it :)
I really like this chapter, you get to see the more emotional side of Kellin and of course, he revealed the truth to Vic - although I can tell that he's not processed all of what Kellin has said as if I were him, I would be furious at him for murdering the people that he loves the most. Who knows, this could just be the start of something much more intense and powerful!
I really like this chapter, you get to see the more emotional side of Kellin and of course, he revealed the truth to Vic - although I can tell that he's not processed all of what Kellin has said as if I were him, I would be furious at him for murdering the people that he loves the most. Who knows, this could just be the start of something much more intense and powerful!
@diamond_bullet
You're very welcome, it is a unique storyline, so make sure that you pat yourself on the back for that, there's only a few little errors in it, but other than that, it's an enjoyable and unique fic!
You're very welcome, it is a unique storyline, so make sure that you pat yourself on the back for that, there's only a few little errors in it, but other than that, it's an enjoyable and unique fic!
@SoWrongItsLottie
some guy did. sorry i messed up on that cause i'm writing a bunch of different stories at once and sometimes i get them confused, thanks for telling me i'll fix that
some guy did. sorry i messed up on that cause i'm writing a bunch of different stories at once and sometimes i get them confused, thanks for telling me i'll fix that
@SoWrongItsLottie thanks i always have troubles with that, i'm going back and editing a few chapters do to the fact that i screw up a lot thanks for the feed-back though it really helped and i like when people are honest :)
I love this story so much :
12/31/13