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Hidden in Plain Sight

Chapter 14

*Third person*

Pierce The Veil and their producer Carly have been working hard throughout the weeks. Late nights and earlier mornings have really taken it's toll on them but it's all paying off. They are pretty much halfway through the album making with only Vic's guitar and vocals to be done and guest vocals. They could not be anymore happy with how far they've come.

They are currently working on the new album art. They've agreed on the album to be named Collide With The Sky. Vic says it fits in so well with how the tracks have been written. They all have meaning and speak to so many people in many different ways. The guys have a rough idea on what they want to do for the album art with a friend of theirs, Liam Hart, already drawing up the new art.

And what better way to celebrate this achievement than to go out and party. Yes. They are out again, but this time is different. The band are all bringing their dates with Carly coming alone, but she says she doesn't mind. So Mike has asked Alysha to come along and Vic bringing the lovely Danielle. Tony has found a cute girl named Erin (since he got over his little fascination of Carly) and Jaime has bought Jess. They go to the well known club known as Wolf.

Carly picks up the Fuentes brothers and their dates while Jaime drives Tony and their dates. They arrive shortly after 8, heading into the club with a great feeling amongst them. They find two spare tables and combine them to fit everyone. To begin the night, the guys all buy their girls some drinks and yep, Carly buys her own. Each of them comment on how proud and happy they are to be here and how far they have come thanking Carly in the process. They soon down the drink.

On the second round of drinks, the girls decide to move to the dance floor while the guys stay back and watch them from their table. No one minded. It pretty much gave the girls a time to have fun but more time to get to know Carly better considering Jess still isn't totally okay with her yet. Jaime still doesn't know why but it's still having a negative effect on him and their relationship.

"I still don't understand what she has against Carly. You've all been there, you guys all know that we are just friends, like you are with her" Jaime tells the boys. "Jess and I have been fighting a lot lately, and it's really got me worried"

Jaime has been talking to Carly in private about his relationship because he trusts her and she gives really good advice. Carly never wants to hurt anyone and she hates seeing people so hurt. Jess doesn't know about it and it's probably a good thing at this point, but he has told Carly how worried he is about breaking up with Jess soon. He's told her that he just can't handle her always assuming everything and making out that it is his fault.

"Dude, I really don't know what to say. It just sucks the way she's always saying stuff, and you know that pretty much all of us have spoken to her, including Carly" Vic lays a hand on the saddend band member. "Id just hate to see you lose her, I can see how much you love her"

The girls soon return to the table from the dance floor, laughing together and smiling. "Another drink I'm thinking" Carly says before heading to the bar with a Alysha. They bring back Erin and Jess' drinks and hand it too them. Joining the guys, they sit and talk for a while.

Until Jess starts to feel a bit sick. "Jaime, I really don't feel-" Jess ran off to the nearest bathroom. Stunned, everyone froze for a second, but Erin soon followed, then Alysha p, Danielle and Carly. Jess was vomiting in the toilet, violently. The girls tried talking her through it. After her first episode, she opened the door, where Erin had tied her hair back. Jess began to vomit again, but nothing was coming up. She was gagging, heavily. She began to choke.

Carly ran from the bathroom. She screamed "someone call an ambulance, someone call an ambulance" until she got to the bar, telling them the same thing. Jaime's heart had sank. The guys all rush over to the ladies bathroom where Alysha had let them in. When Jaime got there, Jess was lying unconscious by the toilet.

"Jess, Jess, baby, wake up" he cooed to her, tears threatening his eyes. "Jess you gotta open your eyes" and the tears fell.

The owner of the club came barging through, demanding to know what was going on. Carly had explained to him that her friend, Jess, had suddenly became sick and vomited violently until she fell unconscious. Tony and mike held Erin and Alysha protectively, their shaking bodies scared to death of their friend. Carly sat by Jaime trying to get Jess to wake up. Apparently Carly has her senior first aid certificate.

The ambulance soon arrived and the paramedics soon took over. Jaime was removed from Jess, sending him into a fit of rage. Vic and Carly had held him back, trying their absolute best to keep him as calm as possible, but his pain was understandable. The paramedics had brought in a gurney and took her to the ambulance, Jaime had got in with Jess. "We'll meet you at the hospital" Vic said to him before the doors were shut and the ambulance took off.

The police had reached the club, and approached the band members. They had asked them questions, everyone giving the exact same answer. Jess just felt sick all of a sudden and vomited until she fell unconscious. The police had let them go to the hospital.

Carly drove the brothers and the girls while Tony and Erin took Jaime's car. All of them were so shaken, so nervous and so scared for Jess. None of them could comprehend what had happened. They could only pray that their friend was okay.

Notes

OMG, THE AMITY AFFLICTION WAS SO FUCKING AMAZING!! I WAS RIGHT UP FRONT ON THE BARRICADE AND I COULD SEE THEM AND THEN I GOT THE SUDDEN REALISATION THAT THEY ARE ACTUALLY REAL AND HOLY FUCK EVERYTHING WAS SO AMAZING AND MY FRIENDS AND I ENDED UP EATING PIZZA AT 2 IN THE MORNING AND ID GIVE ANYTHING TO SEE THEM AGAIN.... OMG.

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Comments

Yay!!!

Devynleigh Devynleigh
3/13/15

Split it!!

If separating it into 2 parts makes the story have a better ending than I'm all for it. I don't mind waiting a little longer

Devynleigh Devynleigh
3/10/15

Part 1 and 2 chapters, definitely.

Part and part 2, that way you add more drama and make it even more intersting huhuhuhu anyways I like this very much, you're doing a good job, xoxo.

pierce-my-soul pierce-my-soul
3/10/15