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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 58- Heart Attacks Waiting to happen

Rain's POV

It was finally quiet, Hanley had cried himself to sleep and I was sat on the kitchen counter in the cold, empty space. He had been crying all evening, and I couldn't bare it any longer. Luckily he had tired himself out and fallen asleep. Sometimes it's best to leave them when they get like that. Plus, what could I of done?

"Rain!?" Oli burst through the door and I jumped. My heart raced.

"What?" I shouted at him, slightly angry that he had burst in and scarred me like that.

"Where is Hanley?" He shouted, racing through the living room, tumbling over the edge of the sofa.

I said nothing, in shock of the moment. Slowly, creeping in through the door in the shadows, was Danny. His pale face reflected gently with the dark background. We both looked at eachother, and then he broke.

"Rain I love you." He said, eventually tipping his head forward to look at his feet.

"What's going on?" I cried, desperately trying to understand.

"I've got money stuffed under my mattress, Rain. And my books, they've got cocaine in them. Get rid of them for me. I promise, I never snorted any of it. And Anthony, I left his body out in the woods, covered it up with leaves. I just want you to know, that I love you, and Oli and that little kid. And that's why..." He swallowed hard and finished his speech there.

I looked around desperately. "Whats going on? Why are you telling me all this?" I cried.

He said nothing.

"Oh god! No!" Screamed Oli, interrupting us. I got to my feet and went straight into the nursery where he was screaming from, with Danny following behind me. And right then, I realised. And my heart dropped.

Oli was cradling Hanley's pale, lifeless body. He starred down at him with tears in his eyes.

"Holy shit." I said, stunned and breathless. "Is he... Dead?" My eyes started to tear up too, now. Oli's lip was blubbering and then he started to bawl.

It was a deadly silence now. Both our hearts were crippled. We could not say a thing. We just stood in silence, out of context and filled with sadness. The dark started to creep up on us, and I shivered on the cold, wooden floor. The lamp in the corner of the room was casting shadows of us up on the wall and I rolled my eyes around the room, desperate to un-see Hanleys poor dead body. And then, we heard a loud crack.

And Hanley gasped for air.

"Oh god..." Oli breathed heavily with relief. "My baby." He said, lifting Hanleys weak body up to his shoulder and rubbing his back. "I'm so sorry..." He whispered, rubbing his hair. He gently jerked him up and kissed his cheek.

"Where's Danny?" I asked, suddenly overwhelmed with nervoussness. "I thought he was right here?"

Notes

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x