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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 35 - Like A Foggy Mirror

Oli's POV

Rain didn't understand anything, and I really dispized her for that. I just needed somebody to explain what the hell I was going to do from here. And all I could think about, now that Rain had pointed it out to me, was how Hanley is going to be dragged under me if I don't figure all this out.

I kept her coldly in my heart, I knew all she meant was well, but I just wished she could go anywhere else. I didn't want her taking Hanley away from me all the time. She made me feel pathetic and useless.

"Oli, Hanley is crying. Didn't you listen to what I said yesterday?" She said spitefully.

I starred out the window. "I did. And I think it's best you leave."

"What?" She said, walking up to me and getting right up in my face.

"Just leave me to look after him on my own." I said, again, quietly.

"I've been through all this shit with Danny, and I take it on the chin Oli. Now you're going to reject me again? After everything I have done for you?!" She spat in my face.

I walked away from her then, and headed to care for Hanley. I couldn't stand his crying. And I couldn't stand Rain shouting at me either.

"Come back here Oli!" She screamed, slamming her fists into the bed and racing down the stairs after me. She jumped onto my back in an attempt to stop me, and she clawed at my chest.

"Rain. Stop." I said, pulling her off of my torso, but having her dig her nails deeper into me.

"Oh fuck off Oli! This is it. I'm not leaving!" She screamed in my ear, over and over.

I swung her round and she slipped off my back and fell onto the cold wooden floor in a jumble. She whimpered slightly and held her arm in pain. A tear fell from her welling eyes and she said nothing.

"Oh god. See Rain! You need to leave. I'm going to hurt you, just like Danny." I cried, attempting to help her up. She whimpered more and refused to move. "What's the matter?" I asked, snapping out of my anger and into panic.

"I twisted my arm." She said, pulling herself up on her own.

"No. I'm sorry Rain. I really am. I feel like a monster. Please forgive me. I'm so sorry." I begged to her, following after her as she went to the kitchen.

"I'm fine." She said harshly, pushing me away.

Hanley continued to cry and I picked him up gently, cradling him and patting his head. He eventually fell back asleep, and I knew what I had to do. I had to fix everything that had gone wrong so far. I had to do everything right from here.

Notes

So have you guys got any more plot twist Ideas? I like to hear them, to give me a couple of Ideas ;) Thanks for the feedback so far btw :) Haha love you guyz <3

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x