The Cost of Freedom Is High - Comments, page 4

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IT BETTER BE CHANCE
HE BETTER HAVE HIS SLOW ASS IN GEAR AND GET HER OUT OF THIS PLACE BEFORE MY BRAIN EXPLODES BECAUSE THIS IS LITERALLY ALL IVE READ ALL DAY, AND DAGNABBIT, I WANT HER OUT.
as loveable as everyone is, that's not love, their asshole douche faces, and she needs to abandon them once and for all and get her freedom back and make them feel so guilty and like such asshats they never want to go near her again because they feel DESPICABLE.
and honestly Kuza has kind of grown on me after the baby incident, so though I'm behind on the QOTD, he would be my pic, probably just because of that.
Poor Bella.
so, ahem, that's how I feel about it.
And I just started the entire series this morning.

IT'S CHANCE. NO DOUBT ABOUT IT

Chance and her freedom

No! No. You did not just end that chapter! I need to know who it is! Why do you do this to me? Please I'm begging you!

@Gem_Jar93
You'll find out soon, I promise :)

Most likely tomorrow night!

I wanna know who it is! :O

@twosteps_back
I agree with you completely, he definitely has been more kind to her. So far it seems like he's keeping the promise.


@Gem_Jar93
It's not bad at all, a few others have said that same thing. She's waited a long time to get out, and who knows how long she can depend on his promise. Now with Kuza and Tyler there is a possibility she may just want to stay, but as of the last chapter and the one I just posted, that's not her plan.

Don't worry about it :)

I love seeing what you guys are feeling and thinking about it.

Kuza! That chapter made me really like him a lot

is it bad that I don't think her and Chance would work anymore? I honesty think she's in major denial and might not actually want to leave wen the time comes. She's gotten used to them slowly and you can see her slowly opening up to some if them!

Lkay im done, sorry for the mini essay xD

Tbh I think Kuza would be good for Bella. He's proven that he does have a genuine soft side but at the same time could easily put her in her place if she needed it. Plus he already admitted when the baby situation first arrived that he would take care of her and the baby so there's that.

@Livi
I'll update either later tonight or tomorrow :)

OMFG! I'm freaking out! You can't just leave it like that! :(

@BrideOfFrankenstein
It is a little better if she knows, next chapter she and Kuza will get a bit deeper with talking about the baby. It'll be a good thing, I'll tell you that much.

Oh my gosh. I was kinda hoping they wouldn't tell her. Just lowkey but it's better if she knows.

Ahhhh cutest pup c:

Digging the pink c:

First of all I want to say a huge thank you for everyone that boosted me up with kind and encouraging words. Sometimes that's all you need to get your head right.

I'm glad to know what kind of awesome support I have, even if it isn't face to face :)

As for all of your comments, I'm glad to know that you're all a little in shock and I guess surprised.

That's what I aim for.

Thanks again for reading, I hope you continue to love what I put out in this story and the two others that will follow.

Feel free to let me know what you think what'll happen next, I'm anxious to know what direction you think this will go in.

~ BlackVeilsinWhite

holy flying fucking shiit. Update!!!

@Gem_Jar93
MINE TOO.

OH. MY. GOD. OH MY FUCKING GOD. THIS CHAPTER FUCKED ME UP. FIRST THEY GIVE HER AWAY. HOW DARE THEY? NO. FUCK WHAT. AND HOLY SHIT. KUZA?!?!?!?!?! THATD BE A CUTE BABY BUT OH MY GOD. I CAN'T. AHHHHHHH MY MIND IS SPLATTERED

WTF!!!!!1