Imperfect
Summary
Auden Landon loved Mike Fuentes from the moment she laid eyes on him. Mike is everything a straight-A pre-med student like Odd shouldn't want. She isn't afraid of his piercings and tattoos or his wild attitude. Though she knows Mike is wrong for her, her heart just won't listen.
To a rebel like Mike Fuentes, Auden Landon is a stuck-up, perfect princess. She lives by other people's rules; he makes his own. He doesn't have time for a good girl like Odd, even if she's the only one who can see the person he truly is.
But a short skirt, too many birthday cocktails, and spilled secrets lead to a night neither can forget. Now Auden and Mike have to figure out how a girl like her and a guy like him are supposed to be together without destroying their love...or each other.
Characters
Auden Landon
19 years old. Considered like a daughter to the Fuentes family. Goes to UCLA as a pre-med student.
Jaime Preciado
26 years old. Considered as the big brother to Mike since he was adopted into the Fuentes family at the age of 8. Currently a Marine and is home for a few weeks due to an accident.
Mike Fuentes
21 years old. Works for a tattoo shop called Marked and is a natural talent. He lives with Tony and constantly rebels against his parents. He's a complicated guy.
Vic Fuentes
Mike's older brother. You'll learn more of Vic's story throughout the story.
Nevertheless your writing in general (from your other stories) is lovely. So don't be discouraged to not continue writing. You can easily make this story your own by switching up the plot completely. I won't throw shade your way because I want you to continue this story. However, you should tweak the plot a little because it is quite similar to Rule. I still think you're a lovely person!
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