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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 99 - We Lived Fast And Died Pretty

Oli's POV

My hands shook violently. I heard her breathing beside my ear. I wanted to hold her. I wanted to tell her everything. But it was better this way. Better to stay silent for a while and then jump straight into the deep end.

"Hello?" She whispered.

"Baby." I replied, lowering my voice.

"I've missed you, Oli." She said. I could hear her gentle breaths.

"We've all missed you." I replied, looking at the kitchen door frame, hearing the kid's voices muffled from that direction. I hesitated as I tried to think of what to say to her.

"You'll never guess who is here..." She whispered.

The moment was gone. I swallowed hard.

"My brother. My own brother." I could just imagine her smiling. Her cheeks lifting up to compliment her eyes. I could see her face perfectly.

"That's great baby." I whispered. "We were wondering if you would want to take a day trip sometime this week?" I gulped. My palms were sweaty and I felt drowsy.

"To see you all?" She asked. Her voice was innocent and tender.

"Yes." I replied simply. "I can pick you up at ten o'clock on Wednesday morning... But if you don't want to see us I understand." I tried to calmly present it to her.

"No... I..." She mumbled slightly. It was adorable. I wanted to hold her so bad. I held her ring in my hand and glanced down at it. She would love it. I knew she would. She took a deep breath. "Sure... It's Sienna's birthday isn't it?"

"Yes. She wanted you there. So did I." I smiled at her acceptance. She would be my fiance by thursday. I just needed to plan where to take her and how to make it fun for both the kids aswell.

Notes

Aww he's going to propose <3

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

X_Cherry_Blossom_X @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/4/17

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

Plants_And_Stones @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
2/28/17

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

xInfinite_Dreamerx @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/25/16

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!