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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 83 - I've Lost The Plot Again

Oli's POV

Rain was holding her wrists, covering them from me. She had run out of the living room and into the kitchen, standing in the corner and facing the wall. She was whimpering, and I followed her in quietly.

"Why?" I whispered.

"Because I'm still scarred." She moaned back to me, taking a step further away.

I tried to look at her in the face, but she ignored me and turned away. "Look at me, Rain." I said softly.

"No!" She cried, slamming her fists against my chest and causing me to flee backwards.

"Look at me Rain!" I raised my voice at her, frustrated that she couldn't cope with anything.

Anthony rushed inside the kitchen and fled to her, hugging her and trying to comfort her. "Not again..." He whispered in her ear. "Leave us." He then looked at me with determination. But I wasn't going to be told what to do.

"Anthony, I think you should be the one who fucking leaves." I started at him, glancing at his wretched face. "You come out of nowhere and take my children away from me. They all bloody love Uncle Anthony, yet they are so frightened of their own mum and dad. You've made them hate us."

I could hear ruffling outside the door, the two kids were running up the stairs in fear and Sienna was mumbling to Hanley as they did so.

Anthony saw them and grabbed my arm. "You two don't love each other. I see that. And to raise children together is something you aren't cut out for. They are lonely, Oli. It doesn't take a scientist to see that. After everything that you two argued about and all of the things that happened before and when Sienna was born, Hanley only knows to be frightened of you both. You should be ashamed."

"Why are you doing this to yourself, Rain?" I just wanted to hear the reason.

"Because I'm afraid that we don't love each other. And it's all out of control. I'm twenty three and I have two kids already. I've never even had a job before, Oli. It's scarring me because I know that Sienna and Hanley are frightened of us. And Anthony is the only thing holding us toghether."

I touched my back pocket and let out a tiny tear. Everything was going so well before this argument. I thought she was okay. I thought we were okay. Because In my back pocket, was a tiny box. And inside that box was a tiny ring with Rain's name on it.

Notes


Oh no, plot twist! :O

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Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

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Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x