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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 6 - Can You Hear The Silence?

Rain's POV

I stepped out onto the cold stone path. Fresh air filled my lungs and made me shiver. I felt the bitterness burning through me as i started to walk down the path and out onto the road.

"Give me another chance." He chanted to me.

I stopped. I could tell he wasn't lying to me. He was serious. That was his ex girlfriend. And he still cared about me. I could feel it.

"You won't make it back on your feet." He said coming down to me. "At least let me drive you back home."

I nodded to him and swiftly got in his car. Not saying a word to him I watched him get in beside me and start the ignition.

"She came to kill you." Oliver said, pulling out of his drive. "She meant to finish what i was too pathetic to do."

"But you wouldn't let her." I said, staring at the road in front of us.

"No. I couldn't let her break my heart again." He lowered his voice. "I like having you around anyway. It makes me so much less lonely.But i have to let you go if you want to leave."

I let the silence ring in my ears for the rest of the drive back. He gently pulled up outside my house. The place looked like a ghost town. My parent's cars weren't there and the lights in the house were all off. I dug around inside my pocket for my keys and watched as Oli sat in his car with his head in his hands.

I entered my house and fled straight up to my bedroom. My room looked like it's usual messy self. I sat on my un-made bed and started to think. Despite being almost killed, kidnapped and fed on nothing but soup, i was so much happier with Oli than i was here.

Oli's POV

I was about to pull away and head home without her. I saved her life. And that was all i could do for now. Her family would probably be over the moon to see her alive and with them again. I rammed my keys in the car and started it up. At least there was some good alcohol at home for me now.

"Oliver! Wait!" She called out from her bedroom window. She threw down some clothes and makeup and clambered out, clinging to the window frame as she jumped onto the fence of her house and lowered herself down to the ground. She collected her things and shoved them through the back window of my car.

"Fuck this place!" She shouted, as she slid into the car. "I'm much happier with you."

Notes

So everything is good again :)

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x