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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 4 - I've Been Taker From Your Arms

Oli's POV

I walked over to sit by her side. I could take one last look at her. She shuffled beneath my heavy breaths.

I was ready to watch her die. Like every other person i had watched. But then, she opened her huge eyes and looked straight into me.

"I don't want to die." She said, cowering down into the covers of my bed. "I didn't realise that anyone cared." She whispered.

"I care a lot Rain." I replied. "That's why i tried to stop it from happening."

"Do you control death?" Rain bitterly asked.

"Only of the people that i am given control over." I placed my hand on her back. "But death is inevitable. And i did a really bad thing last night." I shivered.

"What did you do?"

"I let you live." I replied, the silence ringing in my ears.

And with that, I got up and left. I felt her stare at my back like a hawk as i closed the door behind me. She had some sort of control over me. And i hated it. I really did. But she seemed to make me feel emotions that i had never felt. I loved her and hated her. And i surely couldn't kill her.

A few days passed and i watched her recover nicely. She was a strong girl. I could see that she had been through a lot to make her this way. And now she was awake, staring coldly down onto me as i watched her in silence.

"What's your name?" Rain waited in silence. I didn't want to answer. But she went on. "The least you can do is tell me your name. After stalking me for however long and then kidnapping me." She laughed a little, but it was nervous sounding.

"Oliver. But you can call me Oli." I told her.

"Oliver?" She said quietly. I nodded slowly to her. "Can you get me some real food?"

I smiled. I'd been feeding her on canned soup the past few days, and tap water. I would have gone and got her food, if i had known what i should be getting.

"I don't really know what to get you." I said, slightly embarrassed.

She laughed. "Don't you ever eat?"

I shook my head and felt slightly intimidated. She ruled over me like i was some sort of slave. But it felt so nice to have her there. "What would you like?"

"Iced tea would be great. And some good alcohol too. As for food, I can write you a list if you like." She tilted her head in an adorable fashion at me.

"I have plenty of good alcohol, dear." I said with a wink. "A list would be good too." I hesitated. "What the hell is iced tea?"

She giggled and sat forward. "It's like cold tea."

"Cold tea!?" I shouted in amusement. "Why would you want that? Tea is supposed to be warm."

Rain looked at me slightly puzzled. "It tastes nice. Trust me." She said before swinging her legs over the bed.

"Can i use your shower?" She said, unzipping her hoodie and walking straight past me.

"Of course." I said, opening the on suit door to her. She looked pleased and walked inside, allowing me to close the door behind her.

The sound of running water filled my ears. I wasn't going to get away with this. They were close now. I could feel it.



Notes

So what's going to happen to Oli? :o

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x