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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 3 - This Cherry Sunset Blossoms

Oli's POV

I'd been watching her for months. I'd watch her laugh. I'd watch her smile. But most often I'd watch her cry. I wanted to help her. I wanted to stop her from dying. I really did. But it was inevitable. She was the next one i would have to collect. And i really couldn't bare to do it.

She'd drugged herself and I had watched her do it. I watched her father walk past her bedroom and notice the note she had left there just minutes before. The panic in his eyes as he slammed her door down to get to her. He called for his wife, telling her to call an ambulance. And i watched the way her head lolled against him, like a decaying willow. I wasn't going to take her. I just couldn't.

I looked down. Rain was lying in my arms weakly, staring directly into my eyes. She shivered, and I laid her down on the grass and stroked her hair. It was so soft. She had so much to live for. I slid her top over her head and pulled her jeans over her to keep her warm. She gave me a weak expression that she was scarred of me. I wrapped her warmly in her hoodie and blankets before lifting her up to carry her to my home. I wasn't going to let her die.

She had fallen asleep and i continually glanced down to check she was still breathing. I had never had feelings for a human before. I had watched hundreds of people die, and yet this was the first death that i could not bare to witness. She was so beautiful and young. And something drew me to her.

I fiddled the keys around in my one hand and opened the front door, wide enough so i could carry Rain through. I slowly walked up the stairs, as not to wake her, and laid her on my bed, closing the curtains and shutting the door behind me.

What the hell was i doing? I wasn't going to get away with this. I was supposed to trigger her death, not save her life. And they will find me for it. And they will show no mercy to me. They are probably searching for me right now. And that was when i changed my mind. 'Its not too late' i thought.

I placed my hand back on the handle of the door. I hesitated. Could i even do this? I shook my head. Yes. Yes I can do this. I slowly opened the door and peered over the bed. She was still asleep. My eyes started to fill with angry tears. This was all her fault. She deserved death. It was what she wanted.



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Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x