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Angel

Chapter 57

*Tony's P.O.V*
"Get out!" I shouted at Rose pointing to the door, she looked really hurt as she turned and walked out of the back lounge. I didn't like commanding or hurting her but right now I just needed to be alone. Putting my head in my hands, I let myself cry. After a little while of thinking about how to feel, I went to the stereo and started playing some music that I grew up with. All I could think about as I calmed down was how I just treated Rose and what to do about Mike. Finally, I felt the bus stop and turn off then there was a knock on the door.

I opened it to find Jaime, "We're stopped and staying at a hotel tonight." Jaime told me, I nodded and pushed passed him walking to the hotel. He followed me closely and told the guy at the front desk we were here for our room.

"Umm, is there any way I could get my own room for just tonight?" I asked and the guy nodded, gave Jaime all those room keys and got me situated he told me how much it would be and I paid him, got my room key and started to walk away but Jaime stopped me.

"Should I tell Rose where your room is at?" He asked and I shook me head no then walked to the elevator and went to my room. In my room I put my key down and fell back onto the bed. I was overwhelmed with my thoughts and I felt so bad about yelling at Rose.

"I need to make things right." I said silently to myself and stood up, I grabbed my room key and walked out of the room and back to the elevator. On the way down to the lobby I checked the time on my phone. It was 9:45, I really hoped the store I needed was still open when I'd get there. The elevator doors opened and I saw Rose walking outside, I slowly followed and saw her get on the bus and I quickly walked away. I needed to go to this specific store before making sure everything with her is okay.

*One Hour Later*
I was almost back to the hotel, I was very pleased with what I got Rose. I was very convinced that it would make everything better, I looked down at the two little boxes and smiled. Once I was laying in my bed in the hotel, my phone vibrated. Tris was calling me, "Umm, hello?" I said answering the phone call.

"Please tell me Rose is with you!" She sounded like she was crying. "We've looked everywhere for her but she's not here, please please please tell me she's with you!" I was instantly on my feet and out the door running down the stairs. I ran out of the hotel and onto the bus searching everywhere all I had left was the back lounge's bathroom. "Tony...what are you doing?" Tris asked, I had forgotten I was on the phone.

"I'm looking in the bus for Rose." I said then saw Rose sitting against the wall, I dropped my phone and quickly moved to her. "Rose, please wake up and tell me you're okay! I love you and need you! Please babe, I want to spend the rest of my life with you! I don't care about what happened with Mike and Marlie you clearly want to be with me you proved that by avoiding them after it happened! Please babe, I love you soo much!" I had my eyes closed and my face burried in her chest. I hadn't realized her eyes opened.

"Tony I love you too and I honestly feel bad about letting any of it happen it never should have." She said and I looked up at her, she smiled at me and I kissed her.

"Why were you sleeping in the corner?" I asked her. "You scared Tris and everyone, they can't find you but I saw you come in here when I was leaving to get you something to make up for how I reacted today." I told her.

"I came in here after Jaime told me you got your own room to be by yourself. I felt like my heart was broken so I came here to cry and think about how much of a fuck up I am." She told me and looked down ashamed. I picked her up and she started clinging to me -she hates being picked up or carried- I started to carry her out of the bus. "I...I'm too heavy!" She gasped finally.

"You are not! Don't even say that babe, you are beautiful and amazing in every way." I said walking on the elevator, I didn't even think about picking up my phone from the ground on the bus, it was probably still in the call with Tris. Finally, we were on my floor and I walked us to the room and put Rose down to get my room key and open the door. Once we were in the room I sat her down n the bed, I was ready to give her this new gift. "Rose, I'm really sorry for yelling and commanding you I love you so much and hope this makes up for everything. I said then pulled out one of the little boxes that I had and opened it, her hands covered her mouth instantly and she gasped

Notes

Hope you like this part, I'm working on the next one already. The next one will explain why Rose doesn't like her full name and what she meant last chapter while saying "since the incident". So look forward to finding out what "the incident" is.

Comments

@FuenciadoisREAL
It all just kinda happened. There's no real reason as to why any of it happened. Other that Rose dying, that's what I knew I was definitely gonna do I just didn't know how.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/27/15

OKAY I JUST FINISHED THE STORY

FIRST OF ALL, MIKE I JUST LOST ALL RESPECT FOR YOU
SECOND OF ALL, ROSE IS DEAD OH MY GOD I CANT PROCESS THIS







WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/27/15

@FuenciadoisREAL
Well, I'm glad you're liking it, but I dunno how you'll feel about my ending. It's not exactly an ending most would expect when there's a sequel. I was even told by a few people they were afraid to read the sequel.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/26/15

Okay, I'm on chapter 48. I get that she's depressed and upset about Tony, but even before he went into a coma she's just been acting like a real bitch. Like, Rose, as much as I want to take your side, you're hormonal af and it seems like you're angry at EVERYONE :p sigh whatever though I hope she gets more likable later on. Great story, can't wait to read the sequel!

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/25/15

I loved how you included an interview thing in there

well_i_love_you well_i_love_you
2/18/15