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Wake me up and let me know you're alive

A twist in my story

Mike's POV

I went to Mc.Donalds and got every body food. I was planning for us all to go to the movies today, Vic looks a little brought down from every thing, especially that fight Tony and him had. I pulled in the drive way and parked the car, Grabbing the bags of food I took the keys out and opened the door. I got out and closed it. Jaime is supposed to come in a few minutes but I don't see his car. I went in the house. Tony left a note "Hey dude I walked to Jaime's house to pick him up cause his car got towed or some shit like that see you in a few. " I put the bags on the counter, "Vic foods here." I called for him to come get something to eat but he didn't answer. "Vic are you here?" I asked for him again. Maybe he went with Tony or something. I called him up. "Tony hey dude is Vic with you?" "No he was at home in the shower last time I heard of him." "Oh.. okay thanks." "Yeah no problem. Is something wrong?" "Uhh I'm not sure yet.." "Oh okay well just let me know if anything happens." "Yeah sure." I said and I hung up. I set my phone down on the counter and went to Vic's room. I knocked on the door. "Vic" "Vic are you in there?!?" "VICTOR VINCENT FUENTES OPEN THE DOOR!!" I yelled soon getting worried. I opened it "Vic?" I walked in through the mess on the ground. I noticed the walls had holes in it. His room destroyed. The shower was off. I knocked on the bathroom door. No answer. I opened the door hitting an object. I pushed the door open more to see Vic passed out by the toilet. I see the note in his back pocket. "VIC!!!" I yelled running towards him shaking him trying to wake him up. I cried, opening his note I read, "Dear who ever is reading, I'm sorry I must go, she can't be all alone, I love her, Please stay strong.. I love you all." I put the note aside, I ran out of the bathroom grabbing my phone off the counter I dialed 911, "911 what's your emergency?" "Hi um my brother is passed out on the floor. he is slightly breathing I think he tried to commit suicide!" "What's your address?" I gave them my address, "Okay an ambulance will be there shortly." "Thank you" I said as I hung up. "God I'm such a failure... I can't even save my big brothers life.. I lost Chloey now I lost Vic... what am I supposed to do now." Jaime and Tony came through the front door, soon the ambulance pulling up. I ran out and opened the door for the paramedics. "Whats going on?!" Jaime asked. I ignored them for a quick second. "This way." I pointed the paramedics. They checked Vic's pulse and picked up the bottle of pills as evidence and what the ingredients were and everything. Tony and Jaime stood there wondering what was going on not being able to see Vic on the ground. The paramedics put Vic on the stretcher and picked him up.Tony grabbed my arm and pulled me back. "Whats going on??" "Its Vic..." I said as the paramedics asked us to move and walked out to the ambulance. "What happened?!" Jaime said worrying. "Why don't you find out for your self." I said going to the bathroom bringing back the note Vic wrote. Jaime's eyes began to get watery, so did Tony's. I couldn't cry.. All I could do was well nothing really. I just could stand there thinking. We walked out side and followed the ambulance. It was a quiet ride to the hospital. We walked in the hospital and sat down in the waiting room. Jaime was upset, I know him and Vic were really close, and Tony.. Well he has been through a lot, He lost his dad, Chloey, and now maybe Vic. I cant believe this all is happening...

Vic's POV

"Wait this cant be happening! I'm not dead.." I woke up from the dream I had.. The long, emotional, trippy dream I had. "Doctor get in here hes awake!" The nurse said. "Whats going on? Where am I? Who are you??? "This is the hospital, I am the nurse and the doctor will be in here shortly to talk to you and then your brother and your friends can come and see you." "Why am I here please don't tell me I tried to commit suicide." "Oh no dear, you were in a really bad car accident and you went into coma." "Oh.." "Did any one named Chloey May Hunter pass away recently?" "No dear, I have no clue who that is maybe your friends do." The nurse left and the doctor came in, "Hello I'm Dr.Faye, and you are Vic Fuentes?" She asked. "Wait whats your last name?" "Faye." "Did you know any one named Chloey May Hunter?" "No nobody that I recall." "Oh.. okay." She looked just like the Dr.Faye in the dream I had. "How long have I been out?" "For a while about 2 to 3 months now. We didn't think you'd pull through, Your friends have been here since the day you crashed.." "Really?" "Yeah" "Can I see them?" "Yes first I have to go through a couple of things like the medicine you will be taking. " She explained every thing and I finally got to see Mike, Tony, Jaime and hopefully a girl named Chloey that I've been dreaming of for the past 2/3 months. Tony, Jaime and Mike walked in but no Chloey. "Oh my god you're alive!" Jaime said smiling and hugged me. They all hugged me. "So how are you?" Tony asked. "Confused to be honest." "Why?" "Well in this dream there was this girl named Chloey, Everybody loved her she was bright, Amazing, cute and sweet and everything.. She came to our school... and then Tony you came to our school too. You transferred and you both had music class together and you became good friends, and we finally got to meet her, we all fell in love with her and she was beautiful just breath taking.. But she was different.. Depressed not like what we've been. Her mom got murdered by her abusive step father Anthony who abused her too. Chloey was in the hospital many times and Dr.Faye was her doctor. She looks just like the doctor I saw in my dream.." "Thats trippy" Jaime said. "Mike do you have a girl friend?" I asked out of curiosity "Yeah why?" "Whats her name?" "Why?" "Tell me or ill guess and I bet you I will get it right." "Okay guess it." Mike said. "Amber." Mike looked at me in shock. "Am I right?" I asked. "Yeah but how did you know?" "Tony in about maybe a 3 weeks to a month your mom will decided to switch you over to our school.. you will meet a girl named Chloey she is beautiful. and I have lyrics for our band.. Now get me out of this hospital so I can tell you the rest of everything.." "You're gonna have to stay in here for a while we can't just check you out. They are probably going to keep you another couple of days but we will stay here until you can leave." Mike said.

Notes

Okay there's the twist.. Okay well i will write probably the closing of the story later the final chapter.. let me know what you think. Thanks for reading love you all <3 don't judge me okay! XD


xoxo

Comments

@kissing_razors
Thanks :)
I've listened to the song but some how never seen the music video

It's from the Yeah boy & doll face music video

@Hold.On.Till.May.

It's from the Yeah boy & doll face music video

@Hold.On.Till.May.

where did you get the back ground picture for this ? I keep seeing it and I dont know where its from

Fault in our stars reference in chapter 4

Iluvptv Iluvptv
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