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@Hayley Fuentes
Of course I will. I used to do a chapter by chapter feedback thing on another site. I've done the same for a few people on this site too. I'll message you with some feedback :)
http://www.piercetheveilfanfiction.com/Story/32562/This-is-a-Wasteland/ I think I did it right, please check it as soon as you can. Give me feedback too? Im writing the second chapter today!
@Hayley Fuentes
Haha don't worry about it. There's a button in the toolbar at the top. It should look like two chain links. It's the third button on the right I think. If that doesn't work then just message me on this site and I'll take a look! :)
@WriteIsLife
I feel very stupid asking you this but how would I get you the link to it? Every time I copy and paste it to the comments, the only thing that comes up is the homepage of this website. Please let me know ASAP.
@Hayley Fuentes
Thank you! I think I will be doing one. Thank you so much. That means a lot to me actually :) sure, just give me a link. I know I've helped people and given feedback before so if you want to know what I think just message me on here :)
@Emzo
Thank you so much! They're not amazing I don't think! I'm just slowly becoming a better writer after a lot of practice and using a lot of cool writing techniques :)
@Dreamcatcher
Haha I don't know it Darren will kill her! That would be a little too much. But they're definitely going to make sure she doesn't bother Rachel again ;)
@Hayley Fuentes
I'm sorry, don't cry! I might be doing a sequel depending on what readers would like to see :)
@Layla
Haha! Megan will get what she deserves! Darren is definitely going to scare her into giving them some distance. He's (obviously) pretty protective over his baby sister! ;)
@Layla
Yay! No more Megan! Things will be . . . different now. Tony and Rachel still have things they need to face. Next time it just won't be in the form of a crazy, psychopathic ex hook up buddy! :)
@Gabriela_perry
I am doing a sequel! It should be up within a week or two. I'll be any updates and links about the sequel on this story so don't unsubscribe! :)
1/29/14