You're The Only Thing That's Keeping Me Alive - Comments

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That's good. :)

PierceTheEsme
11/10/13

@PierceTheEsme

he didn't really mind, he thought it was good. The other guys read some too. They thought they were good.

Elena Perry
11/10/13

Oh you're welcome. Lol idk.

PierceTheEsme
11/10/13

Wait Tony read one? What did he think?

PierceTheEsme
11/10/13

@PierceTheEsme

yeah there's many smuts on here, I only had a couple scenes, some people have tons. :) I thought I'd throw one in there, so I did. Don't worry, none of it is real. And well how do you think Tony... Does things with his girlfriends? Lol. Thanks for reading anyways.

Elena Perry
11/10/13

Yes yes of course! I understand! c:

PierceTheEsme
11/10/13

@CJ6661

and they know about smut fanfic, Tony's even read one before where he also stabbed a girl! so before you open your mouth, realize how many people like my stories against YOUR opinion. :)

Elena Perry
11/10/13

@CJ6661

AGAIN, it's a fanFICTION. :) i write what i wanna, if you don't like it, get out ^.^

Elena Perry
11/10/13

@PierceTheEsme

which is why it's a fanFICTION! :)

Elena Perry
11/10/13

What the fuck is this shit? Imagine what Tony would think if he read the end part of chapter 7.

CJ6661
11/9/13

I find that at the end of the 7th chapter was disturbing in my taste. I don't think Tony would ever do that. He is so shy and sweet and I found it illogical. I respect that this is your story and that you can write what you please. But I do want to point out that you are NOT a terrible writer in my taste. I am positive that you are a great writer in your readers point view. It is a good story, but I didn't like it. Please don't let my criticism bring your writing down. I just thought I'd let you know. Keep writing! And have a wonderful day! :)

PierceTheEsme
11/9/13

@Fuentacosalad

Aw thank you. c":
And oh, the sequel isn't too happy darling.. (;

Elena Perry
10/15/13

I can't even. AWWW. Happy ending. I'm personally not a fan of this chapter because the concept of anything ending happily is kinda BS to me but you can bet you're ass I'll be reading the sequel. You know what they say; A story with a happy ending just hasn't ended yet. This story was great and I loved reading it. I'm now going to go subscribe to the sequel.