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I found this a few months ago but it was last week when I started reading and it's amazing, please update soon!!!
I'm reading this because my name actually is Phoenix Slade ... Friends call me Foe or Ryan . This is awesome though
I think all the stress is just too much for Nix or maybe she forgot to take her pills. Seriously man, I was like scared for her bad. Maybe a Mike pov???
This scene was intense in a go way, is she delirious because of the pills?or is phe seeking revenge because nix didn't take the pills?
I think it was Mike's phone, because maybe it was the police? Or it was Nix's phone and Vic was calling? I'm not sure! But I can't wait for the next chapter!!! This is amazing
@clairephernelia
Surprised you're sticking it out with their relationship in flames, honorable dedication! xD Glad to provide you with a lil happiness through my writing.<3
@The Studded Angel
@PiercetheKatt
I'm surprised I've gotten so many Jaime and Tony requests! Thankfully I have a few things planned for them(: Thanks for da loooove<3
@Merrp
I glad you're even giving this story the time of day! Sorry for the wait! Glad the second time thru was just as fun~
@freedom_writer
Here you go love!
I'm finally catching up on all the updates I've missed in the past few months and this is definitely one of my favorites. I reread the whole thing and still get all the emotions like I did the first time I read it. Can't wait for the next update. xx
OMG POVS!! YAY! Well I'd like to see how Vic is looking at things in this moment and Yeah like everyone's background because Tinsley isn't just born a bitch, something had to of happen and why is Jaime in a foster home? What happened? Id really like to know but of course, do that irrelevant stuff after this part in the story like when everything is calm. So kinda like fillers while you pull the plot together!!
I found this Tory last night and just catched up! This is really really good.
as for the POV thing, just a suggestion, a story of Jaime's background, ya know how he ended up being foster kid? Or Tony's , having to go through a bitchy girlfriend, loving another, swing her get beaten up, stand up for her, break up, only to be heart broken... Or how Mike sees this stuff, and what he does when he's alone? (He's like Vic's sidekick here it weird comapred to other fanfics, but good weird?)
anyway continue on on with writing this awesome, kick ass fic! :D
HnnnnnNnnnNNNNNNN
I completely forgot how much this story gives me life
please write a book I will buy ten copies
and about the POV thing, def would like to hear from either mike or jaime, a perspective of an "outsider" of the situation
also always team vic as you know
Hey guys its me, R.W. I broke my laptop (yes the new one I just freaking got) and got it back 2 days ago. I've tried signing in with my google account and its not allowing me to! So I made a new one with my tumblr in hopes of getting some help. Is there anyway I can get my account back? Or transfer my story? I'd be devastated if I lost access to everything.
If I do, have to start over I will rewrite this story. I read through it before I broke my computer and I feel that there is a difference in "skill" when you read chapter 1 vs. chapter 41. It's very cringy actually.SO, IF THERE'S NO SOLUTION, I may just make serious revisions via copy+paste ==> microsoft word, edit and post it on the account I am currently posting this comment with. Thanks for reading through this and I'd appreciate help if you know anything! Comment or message me with tips and suggestions please!
6/4/15