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sequel pleeeease :D

@tony can pierce my veil
Heyyy(:
So, you remember a week before her birthday, when she took off with the knife and cut herself?
In the next chapter where the guys "found her", she had even mentioned that it all felt like a dream. So everything beyond that chapter was imagined because she was in acoma. If you still don't understand, feel free to ask more questions!<3

PierceTheSirens_
10/26/13

@Merrp i totally agree with that and i do think that that should do the hpt with the same bands and whatnot and have drama on the hpt!

meghnn
10/26/13

can someone help me understand what happened towards the end? so mya never knew them?what!??!?!?!?help anyone ?

tony can pierce my veil
10/26/13

i think you should like focus on her and tony's relationship and brother/sister bonding time and hanging out with jas. maybe vic and jas should move out when they have the baby and tony proposes to mya maybe idk

paigetheveil
10/23/13

start like a week after she gets out of the hospital. i think there should be some controversy about HPT, kind of like doubts and whatnot and then have Jas go into labor during an argument

Merrp
10/22/13

Start of with her having a flashback & how difficult it was for her to get used to living again & jas having her baby that same day & maybe possibly skip half a year to where she's pregnant & engaged to Tony?^.^

Mrs_Perry
10/22/13

In my opinion...
I dont think the house party tour is needed unless you feel the need to add it in, but i do still think you should add in the other bands ;). Also i think you should just pick up from her leaving the hospital so we can get the feel of her trying to catch up with time considering half a year of it was a dream. I honestly just believe you should go in whichever direction you feel is right implying that your story was kick ass and wherever you guys pick up from its still going to be great! :)

Turtlee
10/22/13

I think it would be really cool to have it take place like a few years later. A maybe stuff for her could start to bad again or there's one big bad event that pushes her back to the edge. I don't know this probably isn't very helpful.