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I'm Afraid That I've Thrown It All Away - Comments, page 3
@fuentits
I didn't intend for it to be third person but I couldn't grasp doing it in points of view so I stuck with what I know :) And yeah, I think by adding my own personal traits sometimes makes it easier for me to write some chapters too, which is always a great help. :)
I didn't intend for it to be third person but I couldn't grasp doing it in points of view so I stuck with what I know :) And yeah, I think by adding my own personal traits sometimes makes it easier for me to write some chapters too, which is always a great help. :)
@KealieghRachel
Aw, you're very welcome! It's an incredible movie, yes! And aw, it's good to make the characters personal to you, it makes them more real and allows others to form a connection with them.
Just read Chapter Eight! You're amazingly talented at writing, I really dislike third person stories but this is an absolute killer, you're nailing it. Your technique is just wow.
You don't need to thank me. (:
Aw, you're very welcome! It's an incredible movie, yes! And aw, it's good to make the characters personal to you, it makes them more real and allows others to form a connection with them.
Just read Chapter Eight! You're amazingly talented at writing, I really dislike third person stories but this is an absolute killer, you're nailing it. Your technique is just wow.
You don't need to thank me. (:
@fuentits
This comment means so much to me thank you. The Breakfast Club is one of my favourite movies. I like to add bits of myself into my characters too haha.
This really made me smile, gah thanks again :')
This comment means so much to me thank you. The Breakfast Club is one of my favourite movies. I like to add bits of myself into my characters too haha.
This really made me smile, gah thanks again :')
Gah, this is perfection!
I know The Breakfast Club off by heart, haha, it's wonderful!
I could really imagine Tony saying 'No, Noelle this is serious, who is this' in his voice and everything, aw!
'we thought you'd murdered one another' oh mike :')
I just loved it a lot! You're crazy talented!
I know The Breakfast Club off by heart, haha, it's wonderful!
I could really imagine Tony saying 'No, Noelle this is serious, who is this' in his voice and everything, aw!
'we thought you'd murdered one another' oh mike :')
I just loved it a lot! You're crazy talented!
Thank you so much :)
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