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I'm Afraid That I've Thrown It All Away - Comments, page 3

@sheepcat_
Thank you so much :)
this is great :)
sheepcat_ sheepcat_
8/1/13
@fuentits
I didn't intend for it to be third person but I couldn't grasp doing it in points of view so I stuck with what I know :) And yeah, I think by adding my own personal traits sometimes makes it easier for me to write some chapters too, which is always a great help. :)
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/30/13
@KealieghRachel
Aw, you're very welcome! It's an incredible movie, yes! And aw, it's good to make the characters personal to you, it makes them more real and allows others to form a connection with them.
Just read Chapter Eight! You're amazingly talented at writing, I really dislike third person stories but this is an absolute killer, you're nailing it. Your technique is just wow.

You don't need to thank me. (:
fuentits fuentits
7/30/13
@fuentits
This comment means so much to me thank you. The Breakfast Club is one of my favourite movies. I like to add bits of myself into my characters too haha.

This really made me smile, gah thanks again :')
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/30/13
Gah, this is perfection!

I know The Breakfast Club off by heart, haha, it's wonderful!

I could really imagine Tony saying 'No, Noelle this is serious, who is this' in his voice and everything, aw!

'we thought you'd murdered one another' oh mike :')

I just loved it a lot! You're crazy talented!
fuentits fuentits
7/30/13
@fuentits
Thank you. I'm glad it's noticeable.
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/30/13
@KealieghRachel
Yeah, I can see that. It really works :)
fuentits fuentits
7/30/13
@fuentits
Thanks. I like to make the female characters in my stories strong for some reason.
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/30/13
Aww this was the best! I really like Noelle she's a beast :)
fuentits fuentits
7/29/13
@KealieghRachel
i'm happy you did! it's hilarioussss
piercethevie piercethevie
7/28/13
@fuckyeahmikefuentes
It's one of my favourite pictures of them two so I just had to use it haha
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/28/13
the cover photo makes me laugh... TONY'S FACE:D
piercethevie piercethevie
7/28/13
@clairephernelia
Indeed it is :)
KealieghRachel KealieghRachel
7/27/13
I can tell this is going to be full of drama :)
clairephernelia clairephernelia
7/27/13