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Can You Fix The Broken?

Summary ~

Mia Stratton was a beautiful, smart, independent, and loving 19-year-old girl who had the entire world in front of her after graduating first in her high school class. She had the key to unlock the That was until the night of October 17th, where the desire to be loved lead an innocent girl to have her spirit and body broken. After two men (Felix and Dylan) find her on the side of the road, they take her in and try to help her overcome her horrific incident. Unbeknownst to Mia, the two men who took her in have large connections to the alternative music scene, especially metal band Motionless in White. In an odd twist of events, Christoper Cerulli, vocalist for MIW takes a strong liking to Mia. Will the fear of history repeating itself stop this romance, or will he be able to sweep Mia off her feet and show her the true meaning of love?

Notes

I've had this idea rushing around my head for about a month now, and decided to finally type it out.

I'm excited to take up another book, and I hope you guys will enjoy reading it!

Comments

@BlackVeilsinWhite
This is so totally off topic, but HOLY HELL! The website is working again!

WednesdaysCoffin @ MotionlessInWhiteFanfiction.com
7/13/18

@WednesdaysCoffin
I always get frustrated when I can't foresee the future of my book, but I tell myself that at least it means it won't be predictable. If you don't know what's coming - the reader sure as heck won't know, unless they have kick ass guessing skills.
This story is absolutely in it's early stages, and chapter by chapter I see it growing and getting to the more in depth, exciting stuff. I just posted a new chapter, so I hope you enjoy :D

BlackVeilsinWhite @ MotionlessInWhiteFanfiction.com
6/17/18

@BlackVeilsinWhite
I understand completely. I started writing "Time To Waste" over a year ago, actually, and I still to this day have not decided how it's going to end and exactly how the ending will play out. So, I totally get it! It's very early days yet for this story, and I'm just excited to see where you take it and what you divulge along the way. :)

WednesdaysCoffin @ MotionlessInWhiteFanfiction.com
6/12/18

@WednesdaysCoffin
I'll be honest, you're not the only one torn about who she will end up with. I have a pretty good idea of the rest of the plot, but who knows, things can always change! The BDSM hints will continue to slowly come out and between where her love interest goes, it will all come together eventually, you have my word!

BlackVeilsinWhite @ MotionlessInWhiteFanfiction.com
6/12/18

Hmm. An interesting development in this chapter. I'm kind of torn between if I want a Mia/Ryan romance or if I want to see her with someone else, ahem, who might be a little taller and have more tattoos. :) Because I am predictable like that! Though the idea is intriguing, and I'm also intrigued by the covert BDSM hints here and there that the guys are all involved in that community. I'm really curious to see where this is all heading . . . . :D

WednesdaysCoffin @ MotionlessInWhiteFanfiction.com
6/12/18

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