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So Lock and Load

A Church of Lies

Matty’s POV
I turned and looked as Kellin entered our shared apartment. He looked really uneasy, like he was nervous about something.
“Uh…Matty, I need to tell you something,” he said. I just nodded for him to continue. “well I might have told Vic everything and then he walked away and I thought he hated me and then Andy came and took me to hell for two days so that’s why I was gone and then I called Vic and we talked and he forgivesmeandnowyou’regoingtobemadbecauseithinkimightbewithhimnow please don’t be mad…” his last sentences were said really fast but I still understood him. He looked at me worried. I just shook my head.
“Please don’t let the kid get hurt Kellin we all know he’s already been through a lot,” I said simply and walked away before it hit me. “WAIT HE TOOK YOU TO HELL ARE YOU OKAY?!?!?” I asked in a rush and ran back into the living room.
“No,” he whispered before sitting on the couch and his shoulders shook as he sobbed quietly. “It was so horrible,” he whispered again his hands holding his head.
I walked over to my best friend and wrapped an arm around his shoulders. He sniffed.
“I should really stop fucking up so much,” he laughed a humorless laugh; no smile even crossed his features.
“It’s okay Kellin,” I said and stood up leaving him to think.
Kellin’s POV
I have no idea why it suddenly hurt so much. I was pretty much okay until I had to talk about it. It was like reliving it. I’m so sorry to anybody I have ever told to go the hell. It was horrible. The voices, the smell, the pain and all of the images of the most horrible indescribable things just kept flashing in my head.
I needed to get my mind off of it. I should talk to someone and maybe I’ll be a little better, right? Wrong.
I felt like I couldn’t breathe. I needed air. I quickly shot up from the couch and ran out the door into the cool night air of the outdoor stairwell of my building. It didn’t help much but I did calm down a little. I took deep breaths and shut my eyes for a second. When I opened them again a jumped a little in surprise at what I saw.
“Hey,” the beautiful boy said. No, this couldn’t be happening. He doesn’t know who I am and he’s in his sixties right now he doesn’t still look 17 that makes no sense. No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, I’m officially going mentally insane and losing my shit because this isn’t happening. No.
I began shaking my head and I was sure my eyes were huge at the surprise. I started mumbling it now too.
“No, no, no, no, no, no, no, no, no,” I kept repeating still staring at him wondering if maybe I wasn’t seeing the boy right in the dark. But that voice, I knew that voice and I would never forget that voice.
“Yes,” he smiled at me. I just kept shaking my head.
“No, I have Vic. And you have grandchildren and are almost dead…again,” I kept denying what I was seeing. Though I was really sure he was there I wouldn’t except it was real.
“Who’s Vic? Replaced me already? I died so you could have a normal life because you wanted to be straight and you got a boyfriend. Classy, Kellin. Really fucking classy,” he said with a bored expression on his face.
“NO,” I started yelling now, not wanting to accept it. “HE BROUGHT YOU BACK SO YOU COULD LIVE A NORMAL LIFE!!” I calmed down a little and lowered my voice. “I fixed you, you aren’t here,”
Brandon wasn’t here. I was already going mentally insane; it’s probably just a hallucination. I did not go through hell just for him to have to deal with the same shit as me.
“Did you really trust Satan to keep that deal?” he raised an eyebrow at me. He smirked and paced around me in circles. I was shaking and tears were running down my face but I didn’t care.
“Oh Kelly-bear,” he said in a mocking amused tone. “He brought me back, but I remember clearly. I remember everything clearly,” he stopped behind me and whispered in my ear “Weren’t we such a cute couple? Well that was until you fucked it up,” he trailed. That’s it, if this was anybody it was not Brandon. He wouldn’t talk like this. He didn’t have this attitude, he was happy and amazing which is why I loved him. This couldn’t be Brandon.
I shook a little as he chuckled into my ear. I turned around to face him to see Brandon wasn’t there but a woman. Not just any woman. Katelynn.
“Why are you here?” I spat. She just chuckled.
“Why can’t I just visit my favorite immortal?” she asked innocently, I just glared at her.
“Cut the shit. What are you really here for?” I asked. She just frowned.
“I heard you broke a really important rule. Andy sent me to punish you. My work is done, sweet cheeks,” she walked up to me and slapped my butt before disappearing.
What sick fuck would do something like that? Oh wait, Satan.
But her words got me thinking.
I made a deal with Satan, The most manipulative, evil creature in the history of anything ever. How could I trust that he did keep all of the deal like he described to me. he could’ve done whatever he wanted with it so why keep it the same?
Brandon could still be out there.
I shook my head. No that’s really unlikely.
Or is it?

Notes

this is really short and i'm sorry but i had really really bad writers block but now i have a really good idea on what's going to happen and i'm really excited!! :D
a huge thank you to anybody reading this and anybody who comments i really appreciate them and they give me motivation to keep writing this crap.
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Comments

I love this story so much :

Hmm if you want to rewrite it I'd say upload it as a new story. Cuz I really like it as is, but ultimately it's up to you(= I support which ever you choose to do!
CameronZane CameronZane
8/23/13
Both work, I mean, if you can find the time to rewrite it, that would be cool, I would like to read it :3 But I don't think it was that bad, you know, so if it would be easier for you to continue, it would be fine too. I'm interested to see where this goes ;)
Maybe rewrite it, I don't know, it very much depends on what you feel like doing.
And, thanks for the cookie XD
KingForADay KingForADay
8/23/13
haha I just love how you said, "time lapse because I’m too lazy to write the rest of the day." my thought is AMEN MOTHERFUCKER.
lonely_star lonely_star
7/11/13
@lonely_star
xD that's so awesome. seriously that comment made my day
diamond_bullet diamond_bullet
7/10/13