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GUYS! I FINALLY DID IT! After having started planning this story months ago, giving up on it because I wasn't motivated at all anymore, I just decided to start it without finishing the planning (which might have been a very stupid idea).

Oh well. Gotta deal with it now. I'm pretty surprised I managed to write a chapter in 2 hours.

So, the story is called A Shortened Tale, because that's what it literally is. It's based on a crappy TV show, so that's always good! Just read the summary to see what it's about, I don't want to bore people who don't care about this at all (just click away if you don't care about this, you silly nuggets).

The note at the end of the first chapter is also pretty important. Just about me updating and stuff.

Anyway, enjoy anybody who actually wants to read it (I will say my writing has improved a lot already since I finished this story... seriously my writing here is very cringeworthy).

http://www.piercetheveilfanfiction.com/Story/84212/A-Shortened-Tale/

Notes

I feel bad for posting the same exact message on both stories, but what else am I supposed to do!!!

Comments

@Nickyvlxx
Hahaha, thank you. You can totally see how my writing has developed in this story; the first chapters are written so bad. I'm excited for our story as well.

aweirdkindofyellow
4/10/16

Yaaaaay I read it all! I finished it! I loved it, babe. You're an amazing writer and I'm happy I get to work together with you :) ♡

Iwannabemorelikeme
4/10/16

@Nickyvlxx
Thank you so much. I remember writing chapter three when I was in a really weird mood; I was so confused about everything. I'm Dutch as well, but (as I recall you saying somewhere at the beginning of the story; I have a really weird memory for weird things) English is my first language because I've been speaking it a lot more than Dutch since I was very young. But this wasn't the reason I chose to make her Dutch, I wanted something European and put some random countries in a hat (well, on a website, but same thing) and it came out. So yay!

aweirdkindofyellow
3/8/16

I have read 3 chapters now and I honestly love it! You have a beautiful writing style and the story is really unique! I also kind of relate to Noortjes feelings. I have the same problems with reality. And I like it a lot that she is dutch because I am too :p

Iwannabemorelikeme
3/8/16

I'M STILL READING!!