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Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown

Graduation, Candy Stores, Endings and Fuentes

It's funny isn't it. Not my life, although that is a complete laugh a minute. I was actually talking about how how things can change so all of a sudden. Just look at last year for instance. I only had B and I was still jealous of Cassie. I mean I'm still jealous of her but we're friends now. B, Cassie and I are like three peas in a bag. That's how it works, right?
How did it even change? It's B. All her fault. If she hadn't had thrown that pen at Mike's head then none of this would have happened. I wouldn't be all sad waiting to go into graduation. I wouldn't have messed my mascara up this morning. I'd probably be taller too - maybe by a few inches. I could be a model right now if it wasn't for B throwing that pen and blaming it on me.
But Vic would have still gotten on the huffington express. I probably would have came across Mike some how, what with Mike being Vic's brother and all. Cassie might have never gotten with Jaime and that'd be horrible. B wouldn't be maybe with Tony. Vic might still be hung up on me. Oh and Mike. Mike wouldn't be all in love with me and not talking to me and stuff.
Everyone looks so sad. I wish they wouldn't. It makes me sad, and I'm never sad. Right now we're all waiting in our long flowy graduation robes and hats. It's like we're at Hogwarts. I'm sure that would cheer everyone up. "Expecto Patronum!" I exclaimed. It wasn't the reaction I was looking for, they all just stared at me. I did notice Mike smile at me though. He was standing at the farthest possible place he could and still be standing in our group.
"This is it!" Cassie grinned. She's far too excited now, even by my standards. I think I preferred sad. That probably makes me a bad person.
"I can't believe that soon it'll all be over." Tony muttered.
"Yeah, I never thought that I'd graduate." Mike laughed.
"Shut up." I snapped.
"What?" he raised his eyebrows.
"Shut up." I repeated.
"Why?" Mike asked.
"I prefer your face when it's not talking." I shrugged. That's a lie.
"Nel-"
"Stop talking." I whined. When he talks his lips move to quick for me to watch them.
"Well then, stop being a fuck nugget!" Mike yelled.
"Me?!" I gasped. "That's my word! You can't steal my word!"
"Guess what? I just did!"
"You pin cushion!"
"Oh my God, that sucks. Fuck nugget is way better."
"I know but you stole it so the word is gone!" I huffed. "It's forever unusable! Gone! Dead and buried! And it's all your fault." I rushed.
"Stop exaggerating." Mike rolled his eyes.
"Okay, Mr Exaggerator."
"I am not a exaggerator."
"Go tell your mama that!" I shot back.
"I would but she's still mourning the loss of her grandchild that wasn't even real!"
"You didn't-"
"Shut up!" B growled. She went to hit Mike and came to me. She didn't hit me. She flicked me in the face instead. It hurt just as much. "Can't you both just stop for a minute?"
"Tell the pin cushion that." I huffed.
"Nel, pin cushion is never going to be a thing." B sighed.
"Neither are the backstreet boys but you still made me come see them with you!" I shot at her.
"I give up." B shook her head.
"If we can line up into alphabetical order!" Ms Davies called.
Damn it. No! Oh no! What's my name? What's my name?! "At the front Nel. You're a B." B said.
"Well, you're a B too!" I huffed.
"No, your name, you silly goose. Your name is Brown. That means you stand at the front." she explained.
"Oh," that makes more sense. "Thanks!" I grinned.
I went over to the front of the line and ducked my head out. I waved to everyone and they all ignored me. Thanks, everyone. We were all let into a huge hall and I was told to sit down. I don't know who I was sitting next to. More people started to talk to me ever since I became friends with the boys, but that didn't mean I talked back. There were to many people I didn't talk to very much.
People were getting up to talk now but I wasn't paying much attention. Not that I do normally. But this time I wasn't thinking of biscuits or the candy store I'm going to open once I'm a grown up - it'll be called 'Oh My God It's Not A Candy Bar Its A Gooseberry' if you're interested. I was thinking about what's going to happen now. I got in at San Francisco so I'll be studying there. B is there too. Cassie is at a different college, it's still in the same city though. Cassie could have done better but she knew we were staying there. I think it's the same for B too actually. She could have gone to New York but I'd probably swallow my own tongue if it wasn't for her keeping an eye on me.
But the boys are staying back here. How will that work? Will Jaime and Cassie last? Will B and Tony go out? Will Mike even want to make the effort? He hasn't said he wants to be with me but he hadn't told me to leave him alone either. All I want is to get all cosy with Mike. He gives such good hugs. I need his hugs. Sometimes I feel all sad and listen to those sad Blink 182 songs on repeat. Mike can fix that.
What I did isn't that bad, I hope. I just wanted him to stay with me. I didn't mean to lie. That's why I said Dom was stalking Mike. I didn't mean anything bad. I just was scared Dom was going to get Mike again. I know she was blackmailing him, but she's beautiful. Vic was the one who lied the most. He didn't tell Mike just because he wanted to protect him I think. Actually that is a pretty good reason to lie. And I think that Mike has forgiven Vic. Actually, I know it. Vic dropped Mike off. And Mike high fived him.
"Nelissa Brown!" someone called. What do they want?
"What?!" I whined.
"The stage." Ms Davies snapped. I looked up and saw our principal waiting with my diploma and tutting. I ran up on stage and managed to not fall over. Impressive, I know. Mom was pretending that I wasn't her daughter while Nicky was laughing at me. I shook our principals hand and took my diploma. Then I waved to everyone as I skipped off to stand with everyone else.
I watched as everyone got theirs. I could feel someone come behind me and I screamed. Someone put their hand over my mouth. That's it, I'm being kidnapped. At my own graduation too. Oh no. They're going to take me away to their torture room. I'll be detained. I'll be forced to listen to Kylie! I don't want to listen to Kylie! I bit down on their hand and heard Mike yelp.
"Nel!" Mike whined. "What the hell?!"
"Sorry," I said guiltily. "I thought you were a kidnapper."
"Um right. I need to talk to you."
"Is it about my candy store?"
"You have a candy store?" Mike frowned.
"Not yet. It's a work in progress." I shrugged.
"Look, I spoke to Vic."
"About what?" I asked curiously.
"About getting my nipple pierced. What do you think?" he mocked.
"You want to get your nipple pierced?"
"No." Mike said and groaned.
"I do. I think it looks quite pretty. I could get a ring with tiny little diamonds on it." I said happily.
"Stop," Mike sighed. "About what happened before."
"Oh, that." I nodded.
"I need to ask you something and no jokes please."
"Fine." I rolled my eyes.
"Why did you lie?" he asked me seriously.
"Because I love you and didn't want you with anyone else. I didn't want you to go away." I frowned. I felt Mike turn my chin up and I looked at Mike. He looked goofy in his huge graduation robes and his silly hat. But then he was the best thing in the world. His eyes were big and full of nice things.
"I love you too," Mike laughed. He shook his head and took my hand. "I want to be with you, Nel. Christ, do I want to." Wait? What did he say? "That's all I want. All I want is to kiss you and hug you and do hot stuff with you." Maybe I should tell him I'm still a virgin. "But I want to do cute stuff too and I want to get to know you but we have forever for that so there's no rush." Hang on a minute. "So what do you say?" Mike finally asked.
"I say you're cute and handsome and I want all that." I grinned.
"Can I kiss you?"
"We have to throw our caps." I looked around. Everyone was getting ready now. Mike shook his head at me and took my cap off of my head. He threw it up into the air with his just before everyone else did. Then he cupped my face, leant down and crushed his lips to mine. I wrapped my arms around his neck and Mike lifted me up. Then just then while we were making out on that stage in front of everyone, with all those good happy people around us I knew everything was going to be okay. It could have been just us, or it could be everyone. But I was happy. At last, finally everything was right.

Notes

Hey everyone. Wow. Damn. What do I do with myself now? I don't know what to say. This story has been so amazing honestly. The stats are so crazy. I can't believe so many people want to read my silly words. I get so many nice messages off of you all and you're all so shocked when I reply to them. I've been described as a celebrity by you and that's insane to me.

I never expect this to become what it did. You say that I help you, but you have no idea how much you all help me. You guys give me so much confidence and I can't say thank you enough for that. Everyday you're there telling me how much you like my story and that lifts me up so much. You give me the courage to right and you're all inspiring me every single day. You don't realise but you've given me the confidence and I should go for it attitude to start painting again so please expect some stuff on that coming up soon.

Tell me what you thought of this! Did you like the ending? Did you have a favourite line? Was this story good enough for you? Don't just tell me about this chapter, but also this story. What was your favourite line from the the entire thing? Favourite character? What are you expecting in the sequel?

Now am I doing a sequel. It's going to be from the point of view of Pippa - Nelissa's cousin. It should be posted tonight or tomorrow. I'll write a note with the link when it's up. So please please go read! It would mean so much to me.

Now before I forget I've changed my tumblr URL - it's now write-me-sometime. So if you don't follow me go do that and shoot me a message! And if you already do, that's who I am now. All my links are on there too I think.

Now the end of this is so bitter sweet! I've loved every second and to know you all did to warms my heart. I love you all more than words can say. I know a lot of you are going through a lot so please remember that I'm always here, just message me. You are loved and honoured and the universe needs you. Please please go vote and all that jazz for this baby. Go share it too! I appreciate it so much. Let me know you've shared it too! Go post about Nelissa, I'll always reblog on the tumblr world and reply to you! It would mean the world to me.

Now stay beautiful and be who you are because that's wonderful. I love you all! xoxo

Comments

Aweee thank you babe iove you! Your so accomadating :)

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/17/14

@sleepingwiththedisco
I've actually posted the first chapter of the story you wanted to see. Go on my page and you'll find it. And thank you, once I'm not so busy you'll probably see more of me.

WriteIsLife WriteIsLife
12/17/14

Okay thank you for that! I just needed that to calm down :) and i hope to see more storie sor continuations

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/16/14

@sleepingwiththedisco
I might just add a chapter here and there to it. I have loads pre written I just definitely don't have time to write. With working in retail over Christmas, working on the KKP and going to college too I have no time. But thank you lovely! You're so sweet! With Break The Barricade I'm not saying it's impossible, but so unlikely it'll be finished. Like I said I'm so busy and Simone is at university doing a psychology degree. I actually only get to speak to her properly around once a week because she's so packed! And ahh I see xoxo

WriteIsLife WriteIsLife
12/16/14

And i meant for the other series i just commented on this :) since im lazy

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/15/14