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Senior Year, Biscuits & The Fuentes Family As Told By Nelissa Brown

Couples, Fighting, Catastrophes and Fuentes

Now there's taking something well and there's being painfully happy and unbearable. We didn't even have to tell them. Everyone knew because we started acting like we did before but with kissing. It's not like everyone threw us a party and got balloons with our faces on. But Jaime is even worse than usual. He can't stand still and this morning he literally skipped to class. He got detention for that. He won't leave us alone either. Every time Mike holds my hand Jaime stats yelling. Cassie is trying to calm him down but it's not working. B is on his side. And Tony is on B's. Of course he is.
When Mike pulled me to him before we went into class Jaime started giggling. Mike rolled his eyes and took me over to a tree. He tried to pick a leaf out of my hair but got his finger tangled. I pouted at him and Mike leant down to kiss my lips better again. I could hear everyone laughing. "Guys!" I complained.
"Sorry!" B called.
"Really?" I asked hopefully.
"Actually," she stopped and thought. "No. I'm not."
Mike chuckled in my ear and kissed my temple. "Everyone will get used to it and the novelty will wear off."
"It's not that," I grumbled. "They're used to us hugging. They're just doing it-"
"To be fuck nuggets?" Mike offered.
"Well yeah."
"Damn, I've spent too much time with you." Mike shook his head.
"Hey, I am a treasure!" I exclaimed.
"Of course you are." Mike said and I scrunched my face up.
Mike leant down to kiss me again. It was all nice and perfect, but nothing stays like that. Of course not. "Get away from my girlfriend!" Oh Oli. Poor, deluded Oli.
"Your girlfriend?" Mike laughed bitterly. "You wish."
"I don't need to wish because she is!"
"Nuh uh!" Mike shook his head.
"Uh huh!" Oli shot back.
"What do you even want?" Mike snapped.
"You're making out with my girlfriend!"
"She's not your girlfriend!"
"Is!" Oli yelled.
"Nel, tell him." Mike said.
"Well, we never technically broke up." I said awkwardly.
"What?!" Mike said angrily.
"I didn't think we had to! B didn't break up with Linton!"
"Linton is off his rocker!" Mike sighed. "Why didn't you do it?!"
"I forgot!" I defended.
"How do you forget?" Mike asked.
"Yeah how?" Oli sighed.
Oli grabbed my arm and pulled me over to him, because it worked out so well last time. Then Mike grabbed me back. I pulled away from both of them and folded my arms across my chest while I huffed.
"What is going on?!" someone yelled. I'm not sure who. All the pulling has got me disorientated.
"You slut!" Dom screamed. It just gets worse. She stormed over and glared at me.
"Leave us alone or I'll call the police!" Mike threatened. He's digging a deeper hole. My hole is so deep I might as well be in hell. I'm sitting over Satan. At least I'm away from all the drama in my hole. I have continents in my hair so I can start my own civilisations.
"Get away from that hussy!" Dom yelled. "She can't have you! You're mine!"
"I'm not!" Mike yelled.
"You're my boyfriend!"
"I think you need some professional help!" Mike sighed.
"Do you really want to deal with all this drama?" Oli asked me. Isn't that a stupid question.
"You manipulative child!" Dom screeched. Then she took off her shoe and threw it at me. It hit me in the head. I think I'm bleeding. Yippee.
"You big, fat bully!" B yelled. Then she came up behind Dom and hit her over the head with a skateboard. I gasped and my eyes widened as as if in slow motion Dom fell down onto the floor, her eyes rolled back and she lay unconscious.
"You've killed her!" I gasped.
"She deserved it." B shrugged. Well okay then.
"It's your fault!" Oli yelled at Mike.
Oli went forward and they started pushing each other. Stupid boys. Then out of nowhere Oli punched Mike right on the nose. Mike yelped and held his face. "Do something!" B snapped at Tony. Tony came out of nowhere and pushed Oli, making him fall down. I heard Jaime laughing and turned. Cassie glared at him and hit him over the head. Jaime shut up and started to back away, rubbing where Cassie had hit. It all seemed to be going fairly well until Jaime fell over Oli who was still on the floor. Jaime was lying down next to Oli who had crawled away in case he caught any Jaime germs apparently.
I've lost track of what is happening. I've never been more confused in my life. I'm standing next to the same tree while there's an unconscious Dom laid out on the ground, a sore Oli sat next to her, a bleeding Mike not far away, a Jaime lying on the ground, a Cassie trying to help him out, a rather proud Tony with his arm around pissed off B while she examined her knuckles.
I could hear ambulance sirens and put my head in my hands. I want to go back to bed. Teachers rushed over and Ms Davies and came to me. "What happened, Nelissa?" she demanded.
"I wish I knew." I sighed.

Notes

Hey! This is early today, I'm going to work soon though. A few people have said they want me to do the writing tips thing, but tell me what things you would like tips on! So what did you think? Lots going on. Will Dom wake up? Is everyone okay? Will Nel finally break up with Oli? xo

Comments

Aweee thank you babe iove you! Your so accomadating :)

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/17/14

@sleepingwiththedisco
I've actually posted the first chapter of the story you wanted to see. Go on my page and you'll find it. And thank you, once I'm not so busy you'll probably see more of me.

WriteIsLife WriteIsLife
12/17/14

Okay thank you for that! I just needed that to calm down :) and i hope to see more storie sor continuations

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/16/14

@sleepingwiththedisco
I might just add a chapter here and there to it. I have loads pre written I just definitely don't have time to write. With working in retail over Christmas, working on the KKP and going to college too I have no time. But thank you lovely! You're so sweet! With Break The Barricade I'm not saying it's impossible, but so unlikely it'll be finished. Like I said I'm so busy and Simone is at university doing a psychology degree. I actually only get to speak to her properly around once a week because she's so packed! And ahh I see xoxo

WriteIsLife WriteIsLife
12/16/14

And i meant for the other series i just commented on this :) since im lazy

Divinebitches Divinebitches
12/15/14