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Eternal

How Long Until We Ever Get What We Deserve?

There was rocking and splash. The noise was foreign to my ears and I kept feeling the cold nip at my fingers curled into my chest. The snow had been there, and then it hadn’t.

I had felt the rocking motion stop and I felt like I was flying. So many feelings, so many feelings…

My eyelids were frozen shut and I might as well be trapped in an iceberg. I couldn’t move and my thoughts were trudging through cold sludge. I must be dying. I had to be dying. I must be dying. I was already dead, wasn’t I?

This must be the coldest ring of Hell. It must be blizzarding, just like when I died. I couldn’t feel my toes. I couldn’t feel my fingers. I couldn’t feel my anything.

The last things I had seen before I died was the others collapsing around me. Luna was the first to go. She had fallen into the snow, shuddering out each breath between blue lips. Vic had tried to help her, but she wouldn’t get up. Then Misty fell into the snow. Then the others. They were all falling. Mike collapsed next to Annabelle. Jaime was splayed out between Blue and Luna. Then I had fallen. Only GG had been left.

The rocking motions had stopped. There was noise. Could Hell be so noisy? Could they at least turn down for a little? Could I pass in peace? No, apparently not. I blacked out as an icy finger touched my forehead.

The blackness had overtaken me three or four times before I could fully open my eyes. I heard soft footsteps echo through the tiles I lay on. Actually, I was on top of blankets on top of marble tiles. Okay, so I wasn’t dead.

Prickles of sharp needles attacked my foot. I twitched and groaned. Flames crackled and laughed hissing sparks near my face. Okay, okay, this must be Hell. There was flames in Hell, wasn’t there?

“Please…water…” I begged. My parched throat rasped out the pleas. A heavy blanket, or maybe a dark cloak, was draped over my thin frame. As I attempted to stand, I looked around to see all of my friends passed out on their own blankets. My arms shook as I tumbled back to the ground. I groaned when I hit the blanketed tile.

“Easy there, Jynx. You’re still weak.” A soft voice cooed to me. I huddled into my chest more. Someone coughed louder and louder and wouldn’t stop. It sounded like Annabelle.

“Hell is so….dry.” I grumbled softly. The voice laughed gently. A soft whine sounded by my head. I turned to look into piercing red eyes. It was Al’Wy’En, beautiful, misty Al’Wy’En. He licked my face and I shivered again. It was cold and damp, but not slobbery. The misty wolf creature nuzzled my face a little. I smiled but then paled.

Night hounds.

Night hounds mean vampires. Vampires mean castle. Great. We were back to square negative four.

Damn.

I cursed lightly as the hand helped prop me up. The blurriness overtook my vision yet again. A hand gently tipped water to my throat. I grasped the cup and downed the cold contents and sighed in contentment. The hoarse coughs sounded out again. There was more footsteps, more worried whispers, and more coughing. I turned to see my helper.

None other than Austin Carlile himself.

I glared and then rolled back over onto the floor. Al whined and I put my head under my blanket. Eventually, the Night Hound cuddled up next to me, setting his large head on his paws and patiently waiting for me to come out.

“Asshole, don’t touch me.” Misty growled next to me.

“Sorry, sorry.” Balz muttered. Misty grumbled again and started snoring soon enough. I took note from her and drifted off as the fire’s soothing heat washed over my face

Notes

Hello again guys! It's Chaos'sWolf who's back from the dead! My laptop got fixed, so I'll be updating more frequently. Anyways, Christmas is coming up! Yay! Fun!

Furthermore, I hope you are liking it so far. Please, don't hesitate to leave a comment! it's been ages since I could talk to you people!

Stay beautiful!

Comments

I really need this story to update I love it so much!

@VixenMotionless
Aw thank you very much! I hope you enjoy the next few chapters! :)

I can't wait to read the rest of this. I don't think a fanfic has ever captured my attention as much as this one has! :D

-Vixen Motionless

@Broken Dancer
You're welcome :)

@Chaos'sWolf
Yay that makes me super happy :) thank you!