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What's So Good About Picking Up The Pieces? (Discontinued)

I was finally noticed.

Tony's P.O.V.

"TONY, WE'RE GONNA BE LATE AGAIN!!!!" I woke up at the sound of my sisters voice echoing through my ears. Why does she always have to scream at me?

"I FUCKING KNOW! SHUT UP! UGH!" I just wanted to go to sleep again. I got up & out of bed, getting dressed into my black skinny's, blue button down shirt, & slipped on my grey Nike's. I tried my best to hurry up. I brushed my teeth while I was styling my hair & I even pooped while I did all that.

"HURRY THE HELL UP, TONY!" Lidia yelled again. I swear sometimes I just want to punch my sister in the throat.

"I'M FUCKING GOING!" I yelled back. I ran downstairs, got my apple from my mom & took my backpack out of Lidia's hands.

"Let's go." I spoke, throwing the apple into the street.

"Finally. What's it with you & taking so damn long?"

"I don't even take that long! You're just impatient." I claimed.

"Uh, yea right. You take a lot longer than I do, & I'm a girl." Lidia defended. We got into my car & I started driving, with her in the passenger side she changed the radio station & switched on some Blink-182. I swear music is about the only thing we have in common.

"I need to have nice hair, unlike your nappy ass split ends..." I trailed off.

"Tony!" Lidia whined. She hates when people talk about her damaged hair. It's too funny not to do."You were born with nice hair! I can't help it on me!"

"You could at least let me style it for you. I know a few things."

"Careful Tony, your gay is showing." Lidia laughed. Little does she know...

"Shut up." I snapped back.

"Tony....you need a girlfriend."

"What? No I don't." I took my eyes off the road to look at Lidia for a second than got a nice parking spot.

"Aw come on! Tony, please! I have a friend that's really interested! She's beautiful, Tony. Please? Just ask her on a date. You might like her." Lidia insisted.

"I don't like girls!" I yelled. Lidia stopped talking & she looked a bit surprised. I didn't even mean to say that.

"You're gay?" Lidia asked.

"No... I just needed you to SHUT UP." I spoke loudly. She furrowed her eyebrows together & crossed her arms.

"Tony, please?" I sighed & agreed.

"Fine. One date. Who's this 'beautiful' girl anyway?"

"That's her, right over there." Lidia pointed to a girl with long, blonde hair, bright blue eyes, red lipstick, & deep dimples. She is beautiful. Then I saw who she was talking to. Mike. Mike fucking Fuentes. So many things I'd do to him....oh god. I wish he was mine.

"Tony......Tony?!" Lidia yelled in my face. I didn't even realize I was staring.

"Mmm, like what you see? She's beautiful, isn't she?" Lidia asked with a smug grin. I nodded, still looking at Mike.

"Well go ask her!" Lidia pushed me & I quickly opened the door, walking out of the car. Lidia gave me a little wink before walking off into the school. I walked closer to her friend, realizing I didn't even know her name. Mike looked at me when I started walking over & I immediately started blushing.

"Uh...hey, you're Lidia's friend..." I trialed off hoping she'd tell me, which she did.

"Abby. You're her brother Tony, right?" She asked, clearly knowing who I already was. Her smile was stretched from ear to ear. She has some really nice teeth.

"Yea, yea. Uh...so..." I couldn't stop looking at Mike. He was looking at me too, eyeing my up & down. It looked like he was inspecting me to see if I actually had a shot with Abby. "I've noticed you around school & stuff...I was just wondering if you'd like to go on a da-"

"Yes! I'd love to! Pick me up at 7? We can go bowling!" Abby cheered. Well that was easier than I thought. Mike looked surprised & crossed his arms, leaning back against what I assumed to be his car.

"Great! I'll see you then." I replied. Abby smiled & then ran off. Probably gonna go tell Lidia. I turned to leave but I felt someone stop me.

"That's my cousin. You better not fucking do shit." Some tall guy spoke. I nodded kind of scared & then sighed in relief when he was gone.

"He won't do anything. Ray's just messing with you." Mike suddenly said. I froze. Oh my god, is he talking to me? "Goodluck with Abby, though."


"T-Thanks..." I replied, not looking at him. I hurriedly walked away & went into the school to meet with my friends. I can't believe he noticed me.

Notes

Heeeeyyy! :D so this is my first Co-write story & I'm really excited to start writing with BrothersInCrime c: I hope this story turns out awesome cx <3 I hope you enjoyed the first chapter. BrothersInCrime will be posting tomorrow.

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Comments

@Say all that you hav to say
AW SNAP XD WHY THANK YOU, YOU ARE ALSO PRETTY FABBY. :)

BrothersInCrime BrothersInCrime
2/20/15

@Say all that you hav to say
AW SNAP XD WHY THANK YOU, YOU ARE ALSO PRETTY FABBY. :)

BrothersInCrime BrothersInCrime
2/20/15

@BrothersInCrime
ITS PRETTY COOL BUT NOT LIKE YOU *wink wink*

@Say all that you hav to say
OKAY YES I LOVE YPU TOO AND PERRENTES IS COOL.

BrothersInCrime BrothersInCrime
2/15/15

@BrothersInCrime
YES OMG I LOVE YOU OKAY AND PERRENTES