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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 67 - No One Wants To Hear You

Rain's POV

A tear rolled down my cheek as I looked into the eyes of the young boy that thought of me as his mother. He looked at me, confused and frightened. His legs shook slightly, and the wind blew his hair over his cheek.

"Hold on Rain." Oli pleaded. He lifted me up from the wet soil and carried me.

Hanley stumbled behind us. He started crying out now, reacting to Oli's panic. He kicked up leaves and tripped over logs. His trousers were muddy and wet, his hands were dirty and his nose was red from the cold. I was watching him over Oli's shoulder.

When we got back to the house, he kicked open the door and laid me down on the sofa. His removed most of my wet clothes and wrapped me in a blanket. He ran me a steamy hot bath and continued to ask me questions to which I didn't respond.

Hanley sat in front of me on the floor. He starred at me, his eyes gleaming and body shivering.

"Why were you out in the forest mommy?" He quietly asked me.

I flashed my eyes at him before closing them tightly. I couldn't feel the wrest of my body.

"Baby. Please." Oli whispered beside me.

I opened my eyes again. He must have carried me into the bathroom and laid me down in the warm water.

"It's okay..." I shuddered, the hot waters steam making it difficult to breathe.

"But the baby." He stopped and placed his hand on my stomach.

I sadly looked down. "I'm sorry Oli. I don't want it."

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Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

X_Cherry_Blossom_X @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/4/17

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

Plants_And_Stones @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
2/28/17

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

xInfinite_Dreamerx @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/25/16

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!