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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 47 - So Much For Living Forever


Oli's POV

The smoke in my lungs hung heavy on my wheezy breath. My car hummed in the darkness, the lights barely breaking through the heavy fog that had fallen around me. Hanley had fallen asleep in his car seat behind me. It was past his bed time. But that didn't matter to me. As long as he was quiet right now...

"Oi!" Danny interrupted my deep thoughts. "You even listening to me? Dip shit."

I sighed and let out the cigarette smoke out through my chapped lips. The plane was going to crash down soon. And by the looks of it, Danny didn't care who was on that plane. He had probably sniffed up some bloody crack before he came out here with me, just to make it that much more enjoyable.

"Hey!" He jabbed his fingers into my forehead. "Stop acting like she's your soul mate. She ain't! I'm telling you. There are plenty of blimmin fish in this sea mate." He cupped his hands over his face and wiped the sweat from his cheeks.

"You don't know shit Danny. Your just a fucking kid still. You act like a fourteen year old. Just stop. You wouldn't know if your soul mate tried to fucking marry you off. You're the last person I want to take advice from." I sniffed in anger, starring him directly in the eye. "Wife Beater."

He starred back at me. "You don't know the whole fucking story. She took you away from me. She changed you. And you fucked my sister dude. I just needed anything to get you back. And every time she whimpered beneath me, I felt like I was beating you." Danny opened the car door. "I'm not gonna ruin our friendship anymore." He whispered.

I looked back at Hanley, who was still fast asleep, gripping tightly to his fluffy giraffe toy. He breathed so gently, and his petite nose reminded me of SJ. There was a lot that I had left unfinished in this world, but today, I was going to save my girl, no matter what.

I heard the plane. It rumbled above the clouds, clearly coming down closer and closer to the ground. Danny smiled hysterically and squinted up at the clouds in anticipation. "Here she comes baby!" He shouted, with the biggest grin sliding from one ear to the other.

I closed my eyes. The wind swept my hair. There was silence for a moment, and then a massive crashing sound in the distance. It sounded like a bomb had been dropped. Memories of Rain flashed into my head. Feeding her soup after I stole her from the hospital. Drinking with her until I could barely walk. Holding her in my lap all of those late evenings and watching her crappy TV shows. I loved every waking minute of her...

I shivered and quickly opened my eyes. There was pieces of the plane scatted everywhere. Parts of the plane had remained in tact, but it had been split into 3 different sections. I could see it burning in the distance. I panicked. The jet fuel could explode. The whole plane could go up in flames in seconds. I slammed myself into my car door, swinging it open and driving before even bothering to close it.

I raced towards the burning wreckage, bits of ash and tiny scrap pieces were being blown up onto my windscreen as I got closer. I could smell the tonnes of jet fuel leaking out, and the smell of burning plastic which frightened me. I started spinning the car against the mass of open grass land, swerving around in muddier areas. I stopped the car just far enough from the plane so I could run inside. I pushed against the one of the emergency exit doors, throwing it down onto the ground and running over the top of it. I looked throughout the seats, there must have been hundreds of people on this plane. Some seats had been ripped apart from the plane and thrown hundreds of meters away from the impact. My head darted around, desperately looking for Rain.

"Rain!? Rain!?" I called out repeatedly. Nobody here replied. I suspected that everyone was dead. I wouldn't give up. I threw my hands against the backs of the head rests, forcing myself faster up the isle. Some of the bodies had caught fire, and were starting to burn in their seats. Hand luggage had fallen from the lockers above and were acting like obstacles that I forcibly kicked and jumped over, tripping over occasionally. The smoke that was filling the cabin started to make me cough. It had gotten so thick that I could barely see. "Rain..." I called out so desperately, choking on the deathly fumes.

I stumbled onto the ground and reached out for a chair to lift up again. Instead a hand grabbed mine and weakly helped me up. I looked through the smoke. It was Rain!

"Come on!" I shouted, the slightest hope flickering in my eyes then.

"Oli..." She limply whispered. Her eyes closed and her head rested back against the chair.

Danny burst into the plane "What the fuck are you doing!?" He shouted, running down towards me.

"Help me get her out..." I coughed, trying to lift her arm over my shoulders.

"Why should I?"

With my final will power, I looked him deeply in the eyes with complete desperation. "Please..." I cried to him.

He watched my expression, and suddenly he changed. He lifted up Rain's other arm and quickly helped me to drag her down the isle. I could hear sirens approaching. The fire was blinding me, and the thick black smoke was still suffocating me. I gave everything I had to get myself and her back to the car. I pushed myself with every step, collapsing onto my knees about 15 feet from my car. Danny lifted Rain from there, shoveling her into the backseat of the car. I could see Hanley crying his eyes out, watching the fire rip the plane to shreds behind me. The tears rolled out from his huge brown eyes and down his plump cheeks. He lifted his hand upwards, as if he was reaching out for me. And that was when I suddenly lifted myself up, determined to get back to him. I staggered to the car side and threw myself into the passenger seat.

Notes

HEY GUYS! IM SO SORRY I HAVEN'T UPDATED THIS IN LIKE FOREVER! I travelled around the whole of Canada! I'm inspired to give you guys way more description and I'm ready for some better romantic action! Having been out in all of that fresh air and seen all of these beautiful lakes and mountains I can really set the scene for you guys in this! Hopefully going to get it back on the rails :D <33

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x