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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 30 - A Dawn I Thought We'd Never See

Oli's POV

The car engine hummed. The dashboard lights were glowing brightly in my face as we sat in silence. She pulled her legs close to her chest and faced the window. I felt unwilling to ask her what had happened, but it seemed necessary.

"What did he do to you, Rain?"

She slowly covered her scarred thigh and took a deep, hopeless breath. "I thought he loved me." She said, as she started to quietly sob. Somehow, she seemed a stronger person now. He seemed to have taught her what real pain was.

"Those scars?" I asked, pointing to her thigh.

She looked up into me with her teary, crooked expression. "I'm sorry Oliver. He made me feel worthless." She sighed, pressing her hand into her protruding cheek bone.

I looked at her pail face and her shaky hands. "Are you sick?" I asked.

She shook her head. "No. He forces me to take his medication."

I put my foot down on the peddle of the car and started to drive out of Danny's driveway. "What medication?" I simply asked, concentrating on the road.

"His doctor prescribed him medication that helped him with his Bipolar." She shrugged at me, bowing her head into her arms. "He makes me take it because he thinks it stops me from crying." I watched her shaky hands grasp out for me as tears rolled down her face.

"Don't worry Rain. I'm taking you away from him now." I paused. "It's just..."

We sat in the quiet while I attempted to find my words. She looked up at me. "What?" She said, lowering her eyebrows.

"Rain, I can't take you home. I made a promise to SJ that I wouldn't bring you back anytime soon." I said, trying to be as polite as possible.

Rain sniffed. "Why?"

I pulled the car over. "Because the baby is due to be born soon."

Notes

Sorry for not updating guys! :O Currently taking exams D;

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

X_Cherry_Blossom_X @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/4/17

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

Plants_And_Stones @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
2/28/17

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

xInfinite_Dreamerx @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/25/16

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!