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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 28 - I can't help you to see the light out of your despair

Oli's POV

My heart swooped in my chest. She was sat on his lap, smiling as he spoke his foul language to her. He didn't look down to her. He just looked directly at me, and horrifically smiled. His stare burnt through me like fire, and jealousy and rage began to run through my veins. I could have murdered him for holding her like that.

Finishing my drink quickly, I chugged it and breathed heavily. He shifted Rain off his lap and approached me.

"Oh, hello Oliver! What a coincidence!" He sarcastically, attempting to wind me up further.

"What the hell is she doing here?" I questioned him spitefully.

He smiled. "Oh, her. She's my girlfriend now."

My spine straightened. I stood up and starred down on his puny stature. "Stop." I said, pressing my hand into his shoulder. "You are going to ruin her. Like you ruined me."

I said no more to him after that, leaving him standing at one end of the bar. I walked straight to Rain and got her weak attention.

"Rain. What are you doing with him?" I tried to hold her arm but she swiped me away from her.

"I love him. He's going to show a real good time." She slurred. I could smell the alcohol on her breath.

"What has he done to you?" I cried, examining her messy hair and makeup, vomit stained clothes and slouched posture.

"Something you never did." She said, under her lowered head. "He showed me what it felt like to have fun."

I shuddered. I had one final thing to say to her before I left, and I was hopeful that it would change her mind, but it didn't. I left the bar after saying that one line to her, and I headed home to find SJ asleep in my bed. I laid beside her and repeated what I had said one last time before fogging it away in my memory.

"Rain, you look for the bright side in every person. But you have to remember, you are the only person I have met with the bright side you search for."

Notes

So what is going to happen to Rain? :O

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

X_Cherry_Blossom_X @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/4/17

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

Plants_And_Stones @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
2/28/17

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

xInfinite_Dreamerx @ BringMeTheHorizonFanfiction.com
6/25/16

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!