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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 25 - I'm Knocking On Death's Door, But You're Already Dead

Danny's POV

There was a knock at the door. I had expected the Chinese delivery to have bloody arrived by now. I grabbed my wallet and walked up to the door.

"Yeah?" I said, opening it up.

"I'm so sorry! I just can't do this anymore!" Rain cried, collapsing onto me.

I was still shuffling through my collection of coins when she fell onto me, tightly wrapping her arms around my chest and squeezing the breath out of me. She was sobbing into my shoulder. Why the hell would she come to me with her girly problems? I sighed and patted her back.

"What is it?" I huffed, trying to peel her off of me.

"Oli broke it off with me and..."

She continued on gushing tears everywhere and speaking quickly. Wait. Oli broke it off with her? What a fucking shit head.

"And now he's with SJ and they just want to take care of the baby, I hate him so much and I just can't deal with this, it's so hard for me..."

Ugh. She was feeling sorry for herself. I don't bloody blame her! That piece of shit is now dating my motherfucking sister! I need to teach him a lesson! I examined Rain, imagining how much she probably still meant to Oliver.

"Shh." I hushed her gently and smiled. "You can stay here, with me. I'll look after you properly." What I was going to do was wrong, but Oliver needed to fucking pay!

Notes

Ohh So Danny is going to try and get with Rain! :O

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x