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Curtains Close; Take a bow. I think we fooled all of them now.

Chapter 21 - And When I'm Done, God Can Have His Way With Me

Rain's POV

I heard somebody click the latch and shuffle through the door. Lifting my achy head up from my knees, I noticed that Danny was asleep on my arm. Who was passing through the door then?

"Rain?" Asked Oli, in a shocked voice. I listened to him take steps behind the sofa and bring himself to see me and Danny. I dropped my head back down and pretended to be asleep.

He took a deep breath and stood still, starring at the two of us there. I couldn't imagine what was going through his head at the time. He simply nodded his head and left. He just turned his body away from us and left.

Did I even love Oli anymore? Where has he been all this time? We hadn't even had sex yet, not to mention the way he comes and goes without warning. He could have probably slept with every girl on the block for all i knew.

Danny shuffled himself into me. And then he smiled. It was gorgeous. I hadn't seen a more pleasant smile in my entire life, this was the first time I had seen him smile too. He looked so happy with me by his side. And in the craziness of the moment, I imagined myself without Oliver and with Danny, and my stomach fluttered.

Oli's POV

I didn't even know what to feel to be quite honest. She had cheated on me with my best friend, but I felt unusually untouched by the situation. It was as if there was a veil between my mind and my heart. My mind was calm and at ease, yet my heart raced as if i had been shot over and over again. So I left her there, to return to SJ who had always been loyal to me.

Slamming my car door and sitting inside for several minutes, trying to control whatever I was feeling, I got into my car and started it. The starting of the car must have woken Rain up as she came running out of the house in just her shirt that barely covered her.

"No. Stop!" She cried, slamming her body into the car front as I started to reverse. She threatened to jump across and block my way, but I wasn't even afraid to hit her.

"Bloody do it Rain. Get in my way. I'll drive right over you with no fucking regrets." I said out my car window. I wasn't sure if she heard me over the sound of the car exhaust.

I stopped reversing and waited for her to pass. She ran up to the window on my right, knocking on it and yelling at me. "Oli. Please. It's honestly not what you think." She cried. Of course it wasn't.

Emotionless I reversed quickly out, watching her stand on the driveway alone now, staring at the ground as Danny ran out to her to hold her as she collapsed in tears. Danny gave me a spine chilling stare as I drove past the place, whispering something under his breath.

I just had to get my mind in the right place, and right now all that mattered was this fucking baby. I couldn't deal with this right now, so I thoughtlessly drove up to the hospital to stay with SJ again. I couldn't believe that I even tried to check on her. I must have interupted something.

Notes

OMG guys, so what should Oli do? Get rid of Rain? What should Rain do? Should she get with Danny? :o

Comments

Quality read, I love this story so much, can you check out my new story please? I'd appreciate it and wanna collab

Anyone who is reading this, I'm actually the writer of this story, I just deleted my tumblr account that was linked to this a while ago. I wrote this years and years ago, and I think it's pretty poorly written at the start, so apologies lmao. But anyway, I made a new account, I'm older now so my writing has gotten better, I'm taking English as an A level too so everything is good. I'm in the process of writing something new, but I'm totally annoyed with the lack of views it's getting. It's got a kind of similar story involving drugs and pregnancy and stuff so check it out? <3 Its called "On The Vacant Canvas, We Should Be Waiting", and I've based some parts of the story ie. drugs and fights etc. on experiences that actually happened to me and my friends so it's quite a personal story, as I think it should be.

@SparklyRainbows
Thankyou so much, I've been really good lately, and I hope that you can be too, and I'm glad you're enjoying it :) You better stay awesome too, hun <3

I just want to let you know, I stated until 6:03 in the morning, reading the ever loving fuck out of this. This story is amazin . First of all, this story spans over years, not months or days like most storie . Second of all, I have a real connection with both Oli and Rain (which is one of the character names in my story, too!!!). I struggle with self harm, alcohol, and drug abuse, and this chapter really connected with me especially. Whatever you're going through, I've never met you, but I believe in you. I'm proud that you're five (or more) days sober, and you definitely better keep it up. You're a strong person, and it's really awesome that you're doing good and writing an amazing story while you're at. Stay beautiful my lovely creature!!

I really felt the connection in this chapter with the Alcohol abuse. I really liked this update, a lot x