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Angel

Chapter 65

*Drake's P.O.V*
Dinky and I had decided to just go see a movie, I didn't pay any attention to it. I just wanted some alone time. We were at dinner and about to take a walk when Tony texted Dinky to help Rose so we wanted to just get away for a while. "Do you wanna take that walk we didn't get to earlier?" I asked on our way out of the theater.

"I don't know love, how about we find a nice, quiet, dar place to just stargaze." She asked entwining our fingers and walking close to each other. I knew the best place to go and take her. Once we got to our spot, Dinky gasped. There was a view of the whole city, it was the darkest, highest and quietest place in town. I always came to this spot growing up, it was my only thinking space. My phone went off but I ignored it, this was the most perfect moment. I grabbed both of my beautiful girlfriend's hands and stared into her gorgeous eyes filled with love, shock and wonder.

"Babe, can I say something?" I asked awkwardly and nervously.

"You just did." She teased giggling at me. "Go on love, say what need to say."

"I brought you here for a reason." I nervously said to her.

"What reason would that be?" She asked curiously.

"I grew up here in Joliet, Illinois. This place is the only place I could always come and, it being a quiet place, I would just think about things and I've never brought anyone here before. Dinky, we've been together for four years and I've actually been trying to figure out when and how to do this." I pulled out a little box and looked into her eyes. "I've had this ready for about two and a half years." I got down on one knee and stared up into her eyes. "When I got this, all I knew was I wanted to spend the rest of my life with this beautiful girl." I smiled at her with genuine happiness. "I still know I want to spend the rest of my life with you, my beautiful girl. Dinky, will you make me the happiest mad alive, and marry me?" I asked, her eyes were glossy and filled with joy and happiness as the opened little box in my hand revealed an engagement ring.

She nodded looking down at me, I slipped the ring on her finger and stood up. Dinky put her hands on my shoulders then pulled me close and kissed me. "You're the best, I love you so much and I'm so glad to have you in my life." She said after kissing me then looked deep in my eyes, I felt a lot warmer looking in her eyes. I lead her closer to the edge, there was a couch I dragged up here. I dragged it up here so I could relax or do anything I needed to. Me and Dinky sat down, my arms were around her and I was leaning against the corner or the couch with Dinky's head on my chest. I rested my head on hers and we drifted off to sleep.

*Jaime's P.O.V*
Tris and I had been walking for a while before she ran off into the darkness and I couldn't find her, I kept feeling like someone or something was following me and watching me but I could never find anyone or anything. As I was walking, I swore I heard hurried footsteps and then something jumped on my back bringing me to fall on my face. Then whatever it was turned me over but my eyes were closed so I couldn't see what was about to most likely kill me. "Did I seriously scare you that bad babe?" Tris asked laughing and rolling off me.

"What the fuck!? I thought I was going to die!" I hadn't meant to scream at her but I was scared and didn't think about what I would say and how I would say it.

"You don't have to yell, I only meant to have fun." She said and she looked hurt, I brought my hand up and rubbed her cheek with my thumb.

"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to yell you just scared me." I said then leaned up and kissed her sweet lips. Looking to the side I saw a slide and I smirked.

"What are you smirking about?" Tris asked me, sitting up. I stood up and picked her up and brought her to the slide before sitting her down and being next to her then kissing her. "Why'd you bring me up here?" She asked then the realization hit her. "Oh, hell yeah babe." She said then kissed me and pushed me down and got on top of me straddling me. I lifted her shirt and put my hands under it, moving them from her hips, to her stomach, to her breasts. I loved this girl so much, and I was glad she's mine.

We both were starting to take each other's shirts off so we stopped making out and took them off. As we continued to make out with our tongues fighting for dominance, my hands slid under her bra caressing her breasts while one her hands was rubbing my crotch. Taking my hands out of her bra, I lead them down to her skinny jeans and unzipped them. I put a hand in her pants and started rubbing her crotch as well with my other hand unhooking her bra.

She took her bra off and I swiftly turned us so she was on bottom now and on her back. We were still making out and I put my hands on her hips then pulled down he pants taking them and her shoes off. Tris pulled down both my pants and boxers down, I already had an erection so when my boxers came off it sprang free. I pulled away from Tris and stood up to take off my pants, boxers and shoes then looked down at Tris."Do you love me a lot?" I asked, I knew she wouldn't do what I wanted unless I brought up how much she loves me.

"Yes, of course I love you a lot." She said and I indicated down. "Dammit....fine just this once because I love you.....it's disgusting." She said then hesitantly moved closer to me and after another hesitant moment I felt her lips around me and I quietly moaned in pleasure. She was good with her mouth, when she finished she just layed down and I got on top of her. I started to bite her breasts and moved to one nipple running my tongue all around it and softly biting down on it and she moaned.

I then lead a trail of kisses down her stomach to eating her out and then came back up and kissed her passionately. I put her legs on my shoulders and shoved myself in her, thrusting in and out then starting kiss her more. She was moaning in my mouth as I roughly thrusted in and out of her getting faster and rougher each minute. Finally, we reached our climaxes. I rolled off of her and we started spooning and huffed to catch our breath.

"I love you so much babe." Tris said after a while.

"Yeah, but we might wanna put our clothes on and get back to the bus soon." I said kissing her shoulder.

"But why? I like it here." She said to me and I smirked.

"So that's how good I was huh?" I teased her and she turned towards me playfully smacking my shoulder.

"Perv! That's what I love about you." She said and smiled then kissed me.

"It's gonna be morning soon and I don't think kids wanna see to naked adults after sex laying on their playground equipment." I said and stood up, we got dressed then walked hand-in-hand back towards the bus.


Notes



Comments

@FuenciadoisREAL
It all just kinda happened. There's no real reason as to why any of it happened. Other that Rose dying, that's what I knew I was definitely gonna do I just didn't know how.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/27/15

OKAY I JUST FINISHED THE STORY

FIRST OF ALL, MIKE I JUST LOST ALL RESPECT FOR YOU
SECOND OF ALL, ROSE IS DEAD OH MY GOD I CANT PROCESS THIS







WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/27/15

@FuenciadoisREAL
Well, I'm glad you're liking it, but I dunno how you'll feel about my ending. It's not exactly an ending most would expect when there's a sequel. I was even told by a few people they were afraid to read the sequel.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/26/15

Okay, I'm on chapter 48. I get that she's depressed and upset about Tony, but even before he went into a coma she's just been acting like a real bitch. Like, Rose, as much as I want to take your side, you're hormonal af and it seems like you're angry at EVERYONE :p sigh whatever though I hope she gets more likable later on. Great story, can't wait to read the sequel!

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/25/15

I loved how you included an interview thing in there

well_i_love_you well_i_love_you
2/18/15