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Angel

Chapter 47

*Tris's P.O.V*
I lied to Rose we were actually so close to being at her cabin we lost our service now, we were less than 25 minutes away. Once we parked at the cabin, I jumped out of the car and ran in to the cabin looking for Rose. After looking downstairs, I carefully walked upstairs and heard the shower running so I walked to the door and found out it was unlocked. I opened the door to find Rose in the tub, fully clothed with the shower water falling on her. I was horrified as I walked closer, her eyes were closed and.....there was blood everywhere and it was slowly flowing from both of her arms.
I began to think we were lucky Dinky came with us, Drake stayed behind to stay with Tony in case he came out of the coma. I turned off the water and as I carefully moved Rose to the floor I called for Dinky. When she saw Rose she asked me to leave so I went down to Jaime, he was admiring the beauty of this cabin. It was beautiful but I was too worried about Rose to look at it for the second time in my life. I couldn't sit so I just paced back and forth in front of Jaime, he finally stopped me.
"Love, everything will be fine. Dinky has it covered, Rose will be fine." Jaime said looking at me.
"How can you be so sure?" I was really worried.
"Dinky can work some amazing miracles, everything will be fine in the end okay?" He said trying to calm me down.
"Tris, I need your help right now!" Dinky called downstairs to me and I ran up to her, she still had Rose in the bathroom but Rose's arms were now stitched up and not bleeding. "Help me move her to her room, the floor won't help at all with her being pregnant." Seeing Rose like this brought tears to my eyes, I nodded to Dinky and carefully picked Rose up and brought her to her room. The blankets were brought back so I put Rose down on her bed and we covered her with the blankets.
"Now I'm gonna ask, can you stay here with her? If she wakes up call me and I'll come back up here. We'll have to stay here a couple of days after and then keep an eye on her when we head back." Dinky said and left me alone in the room.
*A Couple Minutes Later, Rose's P.O.V*
I felt someone holding my hand I decided I was dead and I was with Tony and he was holding my hand. I opened my eyes but it was too bright so I closed them and opened them and saw Tris. Fuck, it didn't work I'm still alive and living in this hell hole they call life. "Rose, you're alive!" Tris exclaimed then ran to the door. "Dinky!" She called and I looked around, how the hell did I get in my bed in my room? And how the hell did I live? Dinky walked into the room and smiled at me warmly.
"Should've just let me die!" I said to them, I wasn't exactly happy I'm alive.
"Fine then don't appreciate what I do to make everyone happy!" Dinky said then left the room and Tris looked at me upset and left as well.

Notes

Sorry for not posting yesterday, I had no way to post but I'm gonna post as much as I can today. Hope you guys like this and sorry for this being a short post, I didn't wanna go on after how I ended this part.

Comments

@FuenciadoisREAL
It all just kinda happened. There's no real reason as to why any of it happened. Other that Rose dying, that's what I knew I was definitely gonna do I just didn't know how.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/27/15

OKAY I JUST FINISHED THE STORY

FIRST OF ALL, MIKE I JUST LOST ALL RESPECT FOR YOU
SECOND OF ALL, ROSE IS DEAD OH MY GOD I CANT PROCESS THIS







WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/27/15

@FuenciadoisREAL
Well, I'm glad you're liking it, but I dunno how you'll feel about my ending. It's not exactly an ending most would expect when there's a sequel. I was even told by a few people they were afraid to read the sequel.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/26/15

Okay, I'm on chapter 48. I get that she's depressed and upset about Tony, but even before he went into a coma she's just been acting like a real bitch. Like, Rose, as much as I want to take your side, you're hormonal af and it seems like you're angry at EVERYONE :p sigh whatever though I hope she gets more likable later on. Great story, can't wait to read the sequel!

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/25/15

I loved how you included an interview thing in there

well_i_love_you well_i_love_you
2/18/15