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Angel

Chapter 26

*Dinky's P.O.V*
"What'd you do?" I asked Tony.
"I don't know...I was just really upset. I wanted to hug Rose and tell her everything would be okay and that she was gonna love her Christmas present. But next thing I knew, I had punched the wall and my hand was bleeding and I can't get it out of being a fist without it hurting." Tony explained, he yelped a little when I made him unclench his fist to wrap it up. As I was wrapping it up I decided to explain what I thought.
"About three of your knuckles could be fractured, try not to use this hand for the next month or so. I'll check it everyday to be sure it's fine." I stood up to go check on Rose but as I was walking away Tony grabbed my wrist lightly to stop me, so I turned and looked at him.
"Please make Rose okay...I....I need her..." Tony said as a tear rolled down his cheek, I walked up and hugged him rubbing his back to comfort him.
"I'll try everything I can to make sure she's okay." I pulled away from the hug and walked to the kitchen to find Jaime sitting with Rose, he looked up at me as I walked in.
"There's no more bleeding but I did find something....odd." Jaime said and turned over Rose's lifeless looking body, on the back of Rose's gray sports bra had dried blood in a spot almost like she was stabbed. My face fell and I was worried.
"Get out." I said to Jaime and he looked at me confused before laying Rose down on her Back again.
"What?" He asked clueless.
"Get out and make sure no one comes in especially not Tony." I instructed him, he nodded and walked out to stand by the door. Quickly and sufficiently, I wrapped up Rose's head and hand and I carefully turned her over and lifted up her bra to find nothing. There was no wound, no blood except on the sports bra. I pulled it down and put her on her back again then checked her pulse. It was faint, but it was there.
*Two Days Later, Tony's P.O.V*
I sat by the bed Dinky had put Rose in, all I could do was watch Dinky work and hope that Rose would just wake up...I laid my head down and ended up falling asleep until I was woken up by Dinky. "Tony, she's in a coma....I don't know what I can do, but I won't give up unless I have to."
"Please, you have to get her out of it! You have to save her Dinky....she needs to be alive......I need her here with me......" Tears were slowly going down my face and I probably looked like hell.
"Tony, you need to leave so I can work." Dinky said sternly to me, she was looking down at me very serious.
"No! I'm not going anywhere 'till I have my Rose back alive and safe in my arms!" I had gotten up in Dinky's face and she slapped me, my head turned with the slap and I rubbed my cheek. I didn't blame her for slapping me.
"Leave, I can't do anything when I have you moping around here!" She said pushing me out of the room.

Notes

Comments

@FuenciadoisREAL
It all just kinda happened. There's no real reason as to why any of it happened. Other that Rose dying, that's what I knew I was definitely gonna do I just didn't know how.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/27/15

OKAY I JUST FINISHED THE STORY

FIRST OF ALL, MIKE I JUST LOST ALL RESPECT FOR YOU
SECOND OF ALL, ROSE IS DEAD OH MY GOD I CANT PROCESS THIS







WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/27/15

@FuenciadoisREAL
Well, I'm glad you're liking it, but I dunno how you'll feel about my ending. It's not exactly an ending most would expect when there's a sequel. I was even told by a few people they were afraid to read the sequel.

PierceTheRose PierceTheRose
8/26/15

Okay, I'm on chapter 48. I get that she's depressed and upset about Tony, but even before he went into a coma she's just been acting like a real bitch. Like, Rose, as much as I want to take your side, you're hormonal af and it seems like you're angry at EVERYONE :p sigh whatever though I hope she gets more likable later on. Great story, can't wait to read the sequel!

FuenciadoisREAL FuenciadoisREAL
8/25/15

I loved how you included an interview thing in there

well_i_love_you well_i_love_you
2/18/15