Love Bites - Comments

@Miss Lady
Well thank ya doll :D if my computer doesn't bug out on me, I'll try doing it today ;P

I love the story so much! I can't wait for an update...

@chiyami
I UPDATED FUCKING FINALLY BECAUSE I'M STILL ALIVE TOO! :D

HELLO I'M COMMENTING TO LET YOU KNOW I'M STILL ALIVE

@chiyami
(there was no ending because I was a schmuck lol) thank you :O this is all your doing lol

@Gem_Jar93

I am so happy you've put this back on here. I loved this when you had the other chapters up ^_^

yES mass chapter updates yes. i'm seriously in love with this story, i can't remember if i ever got to the ending but this is amazing *o*

@PockyCookie
Well thank ya doll :D this happened like years ago when vampires were taking over the sites and a tale, scrawny Englishman as a vampire made sense (like David Bowie being the Goblin King makes sense). I'm hoping to make Nikki and Valerie a bit more important this time though :O

@chiyami
I'm glad that the pacing is better lol last time, I got so freaking excited about the end that everything just got pushed forward way too fast (so Andy and Oli's little confrontation after the party was lame lol).

And I agree Oli's immature but that's kind of why I love him. There's all these stories about rich assholes just being like "oh, butler, fetch my wine while I kidnap impoverished people and have them fight to the death in my underground fight club, sigh." So Oli kind of being a brat is entertaining (for me at least). I'll get more into it in the story later though :D

I personally find that you make Oli too immature/childish/idk for someone who's lived for so long. It's been better than the last one, where Oli seemed more immature than Thorne, but that's just something I noticed. The pacing also seems better too :D I really love this story, your works are great. I hope I didn't ramble too much in this comment and maybe it's actually somewhat helpful.

Yay, i love this story so much. Can't wait to read it all over again. I love your writing style and your characters. Thorne is such an interesting character. All the supporting characters are brilliant and the way you write Oliver is awesome. He makes a great vampire lol.

@walking.disaster
What happened was I was going through so emotional shit so in a regretful fit of aldjbdbs (I don't know how to explain it) I deleted everything, including this. Chiyami JUST the other day messaged me a link to an archived page where a vast majority of this was :D there's always been a few glaring errors so I'm just fixing then at the moment (typos and shit). But right now, this is literally the same first chapter I started with a year and a half ago :P some stuff was lost which is why I'll fill in when we reach that point :3 but I'm glad you've come back! That lets me know this is worth it :D

this was my favorite story. i'm glad it's back but why are you starting over?