May These Noises Startle You In Your Sleep - Comments

Thanks I'm glad you like the new chapter , I wasn't really sure about it because it seemed a bit rushed but I guess not <3
@Laura

Omg you're doing really good <3 :)

@Laura
The new chapters up I hope you like it :)

Okay!! :)

Thank you. :) I'm almost finished with the other old ones then I'll start the new chapters to it.
@Laura

Yay you finally updated great job on the chapter :)

@Laura I'm glad that you liked it :)

@MissPiercetheVeil
And I won't not anytime soon at least and Thank you!

@MissPiercetheVeil
Wow I just finished reading that chapter i love it

New updates! I love them. This is a good story....don't give up on it ever! <3

@Laura

I hope you like the next updates , tell me what you think about the chapter Caraphernelia. :3

In due time lol and thank you :) and I have a little spoiler I guess you could say but I think you'll really like the next chapter

@Laura

Please make vic and Marie a couple btw love your story :)

@Product_Of_Street_Youth_Rage_
No problem! And once again I love your story :)

Yay and thank you , I've never understood how to do dialog the correct way but now it seems a bit easier thank you again

@Insecurities

This story is off to a very great start! And I think it's really cute <3

Referring back to you A/N in the first chapter, I think the only thing I'd improve on is your spacing for dialogue. It'll help to keep things clear if you have the dialogue spaced. You're not the only person to do this, but spacing your dialogue will make it easier to read and whatnot.

i.e
"speaking dialogue" Vic said.
"speaking dialogue" Said Jaime.
or something to that effect.

However, your story is wonderful and I can't wait to read more of your updates!! :D

@rxcked

Thank you! and I should have more updates by the end of tonight

can't wait till you update! love it so far!